Hey great story. Although the first sentence doesn't make sense. Also I noticed some grammatical mistakes. For example putting a comma after the closing speech marks.
Example:
...can't do magic," Christian answered.
A way to fix this is to ask a beta reader for help.

Great chapter! Good Start! Advice keep the chapters short, something people can read fast get on with their Daily lifes. Ill be glad if you could check my Harry Potter Fan-Fic for yourself.