Brilliant story. Really enjoyed it.

This was written perfectly, romantic yet thrilling, passionate yet not too explicit. I loved it and it was well worth the wait!

This chapter was hilarious, I love seeing them interact. It's very in character and I can picture it faultlessly, well done!

I really adored the insight you included into both their backgrounds; your dialogue seemingly fits into the canon scenes that I started questioning what was from the game. Great chapter, left me feeling very warm and soft! Cullen is perfectly in character - loving this so far!

I love this story SO much; I couldn't stop reading it! You had the characters' personalities spot on!

This was an amazing story. I love how you kept with the major events and dialogue, while making it unique and enjoyable. I especially loved how you wrote all the companions and brought in Cullen and Antonia's families as well. I however did come across one rather large typo. Dorian gave the Inquisitor a sending crystal twice. Once during their game with the Divine and the other at their final fair well. However I still greatly enjoyed this and look forward to reading your other works.

Finally got through all of this, and while some of your choices are not what I'm doing in my runs, your team setup is identical and exactly what I imagine of them. You really got everyone down pretty well. I absolutely loved this, despite the Trespasser DLC bit you did being the main thing I'm not doing the same. I had been thinking of writing this same kind of story for a bit now and then stumbled on yours. It very much so satisfied my cravings for a good DAI story with this pairing. Thank you for doing such an awesome job!

Thank you! Finally someone that relises the difference between the words fiancee and fiance! You are one of the few. Now all I need to find is someone that knows the difference between blond and blonde.

So nice to see such a happy ending for everyone, all the way around!

Aw, she's naming the new baby Dorian :) That makes me happy. But I also have a special love of Dorian. I think the closeness she developed with him warrants this, and he truly was a close friend: more like family as things went on, really.

Antonia was much nicer with Solas than Theo was... I'm glad that she got the chance to talk with him and have some sense of closure. And she got some good information about this child as well. I do hope that all that works out. She's already paid quite a high price.

Bull's voice here is so strong and on point. The self-blame is very much him, and it makes his voice come across even more strongly. I like how Antonia's able to bring him back in line with a command. He's definitely loyal, and I feel for him, but like everyone's pointing out, it's not his fault. All of this is too big for any one person.

I think this is a good way of going about the missions with the Qunari invasion. Rather than take them step by step through it, just get them into what's important, and we can assume what happened along the way. That's one thing I was contemplating when I get to my own depictions of these parts of the story.

It's nice to see them still working together so well, like a machine.

The exalted council is tough enough as it stands. Trying to make it through it while in the first trimester would be even worse! I can see the way the both of them feel, and it's hard to say who's right or wrong, if anyone. But it's a very realistic thing for both of them, and should make for a lot of tension in the ensuing events.

So nice to see everyone starting to go their separate ways, but being okay with that. The Inquisition did what it was supposed to do, and there's a nice sense of calm after the storm, and a bit of excitement about what's on the horizon.