Reviews for Avatar: Legend of Asha
ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 3 . 10/15/2015
Update please
ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
are you continuing this?
Sunset-on-the-Water chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Very interesting so far! This is a good story and I'll definitely be reading more if it.
Lady of the Spirit chapter 3 . 12/20/2014
Okay, first let me say: This is awesome.

Second: I can't wait for you to continue this!

Third: I love Asha!

Wasn't the finale amazing?! (Korrasami!)
SpectralScathath chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
I love the new masters. Crazy is awesome and good. It's also nice to see Asha come out of her shell. I like the fact that she's choosing not to get her tattoos until she masters all four elements. It's very humble.
MJ2.6 chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
Oh my gosh I totally fell inlove with this i read the two chapters and might I say theyre PERFECT i hope you update soon and if not a lot of people comment or follow this then their loss :)
tvfan69 chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
i normally hate oc centric fanfics but this is amazing! I love the story and i love all the masters, their personalities are all so different and yet they are all complete nut jobs! I also love how Asha isn't too much like Wan, Aang or Korra, she's completely her own person! keep writing!
SpectralScathath chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
This is a really interesting concept and story. I hope you continue this. Asha does not seem like a marysue at all, but she is six. I think that maybe you could expand on the parents mercurial changes in mood and personality towards their daughter. I love the reference to Bei Fong territory. Very nice.
The-Despondent-Insomniac chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Interesting first chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more. One comment i will make, that i hope you will explore in a little more depth later, is the way Asha's parents seemed to turn from joyous, loving people into cold, dismissive strangers with little lead-up in between. Generally speaking, it would make sense to have one parent be the lead and one more hesitant, in their treatment. To write them having the same attitude completely, can sometimes trick you into having to give very little information on a character, in order to skip ahead quickly. The danger with this is you lose a lot of character development this way which can make a story feel a little one-dimensional/ flat. Stories with the most bite I find, are usually the ones that take a little extra time to explore their plot-devices, rather than the ones that simply use them to quickly explain great jumps head.

That being said, it is the only semi-criticism (for potential future reference) that I could find. Other than that, I was very intrigued and I am very interested to read the next chapter, and this original new concept. I am sure I will continue to follow along happily wherever you take this, if this first glimpse is any indication.