This is a very good take on a Halo/ Clone Wars crossover. Needs some editing, but it's good.

wiki/Turbolaser/Legends
I assume you are heavily needing Star Wars considering the destructive power of halo and covenant weapons versus the standard heavy turbo laser of star wars( measured in the gig atoms) is like a rubber band gun versus a nuke
If so that's fine just wanted it to be clear

Just awesome.

Not bad, I like it. Keep it up .

not bad but there were some errors you need to fix

you just can not end this beauty here you need more now

Please don't make this a one shot! This is such a great story and I really want more!

Two words
BLOODY BRILLIANT!