Plz make it a multi chpter cuz this is not satisfying I rly wanna see what happens after this

well this is good one shot story :)

This was an amazing story. I absolutely love your writing.

Cute!

Slightly oc here lol

Loved it. Plz turn it into a full story bc I wanna see what happens for them. If ppl don't like the secual stories then they don't have to read them. I think all of your stories are great and I love them!

I loved it and thought it was awesome! :)

Beautiful one-shot is all I can say..
Love it..

I think that you should leave it as a one shot. Well written by the way

Good story, Not all of your stories have to be rated M or T, I read all the stories you post.

I loved this one shot! I think its a good end.:)) But I either dont mind if you make it a multi chap. I love storys about prom, high school and collage.
I red all your FxH story's and I loved all of the. So youre doing a great job! Just continue and leaf all the critic comments behind.

Those who complain of your stories do not understand anything, I love your stories and, in my opinion, you should put more sexual scenes,and transforms this story into a multi-chapter

Nice story! Do more please! I like sexual stories so don't change it! ;)

I love it! You should do a multi-chap! And I love your stories the way they are!