This is very good, the chapters so far have been very well written and with a good plot. The only thing that is a little off is how the characters act, Felicity would NEVER let Oliver do this in any of the seasons but Iike where this is going

just heartbroken by the fact you may never update this fic again. its been 5 years but I always find myself coming back to reread this story and checking if it was ever recently updated. Hope you’ll come back and give us an explanation why you have left all your stories on cliffhangers...

This is gold

have you ever even seen the flash or the arrow? do you know how the characters even act. because if you did then you would never even write this story. team flash and team arrow who are basically barry's family would never inflict pain on him especially torture for hours just so they can catch a meta human. Oliver Queen, do you know what the relationship is like between Oliver and Barry, Because if you did then you wouldn't have Barry be tortured by Oliver who has experienced it and would never want anyone he is close to, too have to go through something like that. this story is completely wrong.

Update please

Pretty good! I like your stories a lot.

This story is great! Just the type of thing I was looking forward to reading, excellent plot. I can't wait to read more!

Every chapter I read I keep thinking Barry is gonna snap at Oliver or something and then he doesn't and I get so many emotions this story is so good

PLEASE UPDATE! I HAVE REREAD THIS TEN TIMES! IT'S BEEN 4 MONTHS, IF NOT MORE! PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU! UPDATE!

He has a right to be mad, Oliver! It's true (mostly).

I hate him. I want Oliver and all of them to die in this story. I hate them all, have Len and Mick rescue him or whatever this is emotionally manipulative and an abusive relationship no matter who asked for it.

Hi!
I absolutely loved this! I loved how you wrote Barry and Ollie. I would have liked a bit less scenes with felicity though and more with Oliver, like when Barry was spanked and Oliver had to calm him down! That was awesome and well written! Also, I totally appreciate what you wrote but I wish the reason was different for Barry's training. It just seemed a bit unrealistic that he would go through this just to have Ollie not kill the guy. It just seemed too underdeveloped to be realistic. I would have preferred either a more in depth explanation or story behind why this was the only way (since it seems the guys didn't really even try to find another way and just sort of gave up too easily) or a different reason for Barry's training (it would have to be worked out still but i was thinking either a special poison, or maybe a meta that could control thoughts and controlled Ollie, or maybe a shape-shifter meta that turned himself into Ollie and tortured Barry without Barry knowing it wasn't him. These are just random ideas that would have to be expanded more! And I get that the real point of this story was to have fun with Ollie torturing Barry but I feel that a better backstory could make it even better than it already was! Also, more scenes with just Barry and Oliver! I also loved when you wrote Ollie's inner monologues and he says to himself that he didn't want to keep the kid there longer or something like that and that he had to push him past his breaking point. That added a layer to the story that was really enjoyable and fun to read! I just wanted to comment these things as I have read the story (especially my favorite chapters) a couple times and I find myself wondering/thinking about it! P.S. For some reason I kept writing Ollie because I find that I love how it sounds and when the macho Oliver is called that but I am just as fine with 'Oliver'!

awesome

Please continue writing. I don't care as long as it's a hurtbarry fic.

Omg this is so good are you still updating?