This was a really cool, short story. Good characterization, and the exploration of Luffy and Zoro’s relationship was great. Of course the other strawhats listen in at the end :P

OH GOD MY HEART! That was a beautifully accurate representation, Zoro. I love you man

That was so beautiful! I love it!

Oh my goodness! This is just too adorable thus far. You certainly pulled in a lot of stuff from the episodes. Everyone seems to be in character too.

Thank you for writing this. It's beautiful.

this was a really good story and I liked how they bet of zoro and luffy and that nami actually lost to sanji. That was hilarious :D hope you write something like this soon though, Bye ;)

I love imagining Franky just standing by himself wondering what's going on. "Guys? What happened? ...hello?"

Uh can't wait to read how zoro tells luffy about thriller bark *_*
the scene with zoro collapsing and luffys blood stained shorts was really great written really thrilling ;)
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I loved and the ending just made it kind of a cliffhanger :) I hope you post the next chapter soon, Bye ;)

It was adopted as soon as you ,in the original I don't think that luffy will ever ask about thriller bark,simply because he didn't see that anything was wrong with still,it's very fan too read.

Start talking about Marine Ford! I can't wait for that part!

Wow so great! I couldn't stop reading :)

this story is so awesome I just feel like all of a sudden I am addicted to this story! I can't wait till the next chapter! plz post it soon! Bye ;)

Hey :) i love zoro and luffy together! And your story is really great ;) i am looking forward to read more so please post the next chapter quickly :D i especially like post timeskip storys with zoro (paired with luffy of course)
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