Great story! Amusing!

the last two chapters are the most tense and interesting scenes I read the whole night! Great job! *

Stars and planets are waltzing because the attraction from gravity/love. This sets the most romantic words I see this year!d

Not sure why there aren't more reviews but I loved this because it had a nice philosophical element to it. Also I laughed a couple times.

Loved these parts...
"Let her go!" I shouted as I ran up the steps. "Take me instead!"

But I was caught up in the white-gloved hands of a servant.

"Hold your horses, Vamp!" she hissed in my ear. "This isn't the hunger games."

And that's when I saw the stars — so, so many of them — set like jewels in the velvety fabric of the night sky. And the sky itself, which usually appeared like a canvas, two-dimensional and plain, now seemed incredibly deep, the blackness brought into shape by all the stars, by their light, by their locations, by their gravity and relationships; the blackness reaching back and back and back, into depths that I had never imagined.

Beautiful. Your writing was very good and smart. I liked that Carmilla shower another side to Laura but more so that Carmilla prefers being a vampire because it doesn't take away from her personality. Though I liked the role reversal of Laura protecting Carmilla. A lot of this was amusing because of the snarkiness.

Love this! Great story. Amazing writing. You are so talented! Im Brazilian, so it was very cool to see you wrote a Clarina fic too. :) Besides, all Buffy fans are the best anyway. ;) Thank you so much for the stories. Going to read your other Carmilla story now... :)

Nice work!

Wow, that was good! i loved how you switched hollstein and I absolutely love LOVED how you described the stars. epic.

Whoa.. this was awesome! I loved loved loved it!

Love this! Seeing Carmilla as a human is always my favorite!