damnit. the story is good.

J'espère que tu la continuité.

Est-ce que suzume n'aurait pas active le Sharingan ?
Juste pour enmerder le conseil civil et Sasuke cela serait genial.
Et le sensei l'hokage qu'elle honneur prend ça Sasuke.

Merde l'hokage me fait honneur car merde il se laisse marche dessus sans rien dire et à force il perd du pouvoir mais cela est plus difficile a le ramener a lui .

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

Well done first chapter, though the majority of it is overused.

in other words I should just take this story off my follow list as it's been abandoned as 95% of all stories that go on "hiatus" are actually just being given up on and the author doesn't want to admit it

Naruto is three years old was maimed and tortured then has enough strength to be awake to help Hinata after losing his eyes and testicles? Why not allow his head to be lopped off regrow it and make him Hokage? My point is you go too far hear not in violence but what you make Naruto capable of. Worse, why wouldn't he defend himself from such a horrendous experience if he could? Seeing Hinata being kidnapped couldn't be more important than self preservation. He's only 3.

DB

I do hope you know what you've written is quite illegal as you seem to have not read anything related to the law at all. Child abuse to this extent? One might think how you support it in some ways considering the content. If this were to get out like last time.. Fanfiction may lose another writer not that I'm complaining if I were to report this.. The profile will be found by law information and tracking will more likely get you arrested seeing that this is nearly as bad as one of the writers who were arrested once upon a time for child sexual abuse on fanfiction. Yet you just written something similar without knowing? Kinda stupid as it was quite big and well known amongst readers. This is more likely to get a reader with morals here to just up and report this you should take it down before said person discovers this. But.. Then again I have no hope for that seeing as you might be another inconsiderate reader towards any of us fellow readers. Lost potential as many may say but there's another thing you should also know. Since this has been up for a while it's being reported by me I'm quite sadistic to that point but not to one without morality. I don't mind seeing another person like this in jail it's, I just do this for shits and giggles it's not illegal no.. I've checked however.. Since you seem THAT young.. On your profile as I'm saying.. You met not get a lawyer for a chance of redemption and could be sent to a asylum. Well despite the long writing it was quite boring even if you manage to get frantic to bring an insult back with you I think it would be pointless seeing as anyone here at fanfiction just use everything to their hearts desire and see it as a insult for anything. So.. As funny as seeing someone foaming at the mouth from anger as it is if I see insults that make no sense i find it hilarious but it does seem to do the job against people with autism. Well cya maybe..

Umm wouldn't sakura's mom been killed for tell sakura? I mean the hokage was pretty clear on that one, and each member of the council had an ANBU tailing them, in order to carry out the death sentence should they talk. So sakura would have been told and then got to watch as one of the POLICE appeared and beheaded her mother.

Very good chapter, it seems now stuff will really start to jump off...

Awesome chapter, I love to see the council get torn to shreds, as it really is a dumb idea to have one in a military village.

It feel really strange to see a 5.5 tall guy sitting in a small chair surrounded by childs 4 feet tall, I was really hoping that his body change was only a metabolism of self defense and with slow growth later, but it seems that he will be always older than the rest until 20... Not a bad thing, but the Team 11 will look like 2 childs (Hinata, Suzume) and 3 grown up (Naruto, Hiruzen, Kushina).
Also, how will that work? I mean Hokage needs to stay in the tower and with the council, and overviewing missions, not doing them and away from his village, I like Kushina option, btw and maybe Yugao if she is 20 now and jonin.
About the harem, please, dont make it bigger, I mean, in this chapter we couldn't enjoy 3 of the ones in his mindscape for the 9 years timeskip couse we new of 2 new girls (Suzume - new sister, lover(?) and Yugao - older sister 'figure' and lover(?)). So with more girls in the future we will also forget slowly about Hinata and the new Suzume like the other 3. I enjoy more the development and interaction with a small number of girls than no development and a full collection of girls.

Anyway, the story is good and looks promising, even with the slow update (just found it know :P )

Update soon please love the story

Another story is had potential ruin by having Character bashing and mobs cliches cliche's.

Can't wait for the next chapter love it