Reviews for Mind the Gap
Iwllow chapter 10 . 7/20
I wish you'd finish this it's so fucking good
JustDusty chapter 5 . 7/11
"Kimi realized that the Yamanaka's training had worked extremely well. She was now adept at picking out unusual behavior."
What the hell happened to MC being a 26 yo psychiatrist?
SilverHatTrick chapter 5 . 7/2
Thank you so much. I'll join the discord soon
sguti392 chapter 2 . 6/7
Wow they most likely did something regarding her parents contracts and they drugged her. Wow...
creativesm75 chapter 10 . 6/4
very good
lovenightshade03 chapter 10 . 6/2
My God! I'm sooo looking forward to the next chapter! I need to find out what happens with the Hyuga :3 So good luck with your writing! Your work is always incredible jejjejeje
lovenightshade03 chapter 9 . 6/1
I'm so glad Inoichi and Shikaku are taking the threat Danzo poses seriously! And hope that the Massacre can be avoided... Since I'm really look forward to Kimi and Itachi's developing friendship :3
lovenightshade03 chapter 8 . 6/1
Oh! I have to ask this, did something happen in the end with Mist? I mean, I've just remembered the conversation Kimi had at the begining of your work with the Yamanaka about accepting refugees, did Konoha actually do it?
lovenightshade03 chapter 3 . 6/1
I love your work, but I have to say, I don't think I've ever read a fic where I hated Inoich (or the Yamanaka clan as a whole) more, he is callous and manipulative, shows no remorse and his every action is excused by a supposed future purpose. I should have expected it from them, and as a matter of fact it makes the stroy more real, but that doesn't mean I have to like it, it's sadening when you stop to think about it... Hence why I'm so confused about what to think, because there is a very big part of me that doesn't want Kimi to forgive everything the mind reading clan is doing and planning on doing to her :/
lovenightshade03 chapter 7 . 6/1
I have to say, what Mizuki claimed about only clan children being "famous" is false, since Minato was not the only one civil born to do so, both Jirayia and Orochimaru are orphans too
lovenightshade03 chapter 6 . 6/1
Will Kimi actually be able to become a doctor? Or are all those comments Shikaku and Inoichi make suposed to be hints about how she'll be forced into becoming something else? Fuc*, I actually will be very disappointed if she can't follow her goals...
lovenightshade03 chapter 2 . 6/1
I'm very surprised Kimi didn't notice she was druged, since during the interrogation she recognised the strange taste of the tea and her abnormal urge to be sincere... If that had happened elsewere (like in our world...) the contract whould be void, since she was under the influence of substances...
Fuc*, the Yamanakas are smarmy, and I'm actually sad that they used such a technique on her, she is 6 year old child to their eyes... Good God
kenni no. 1 chapter 2 . 5/31
Shit, three adults just drugged and coerced a six-year old to sign her life away. That's fucked up.
Guestinator chapter 3 . 5/28
Oh, and going on some other reviews it seems like the future was right where I thought it would be. Angst and drama with her just as a puppet with no true will of her own to speak of outside of lip service.
Guestinator chapter 2 . 5/28
So from instantly against to instantly for? Yeah no that type of either weak will or unstable mind isn't something I want to read about. Good luck with the story.
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