I really hope you finish this! It's a great read!

You definitely continued to improve through the ensuing chapters, and great job coming back to writing so long after! I know the kind of courage that takes! Love the new conflict you infused into the story.

First of all, great idea! It’s definitely always fun to see what people will mash-up with OUAT.
I got into it, but some parts bothered me. You changed some things, to not carbon copy the movie, but it still doesn’t feel like the characters are who they are despite their new roles... Killian could’ve been the type to space out or something instead of the moaning, and Henry is the truest believer, so you could’ve had him obsessed with history or something instead of just relying on the movie. You could’ve, for example, had him obsessed with empty diaries because any story could end up inside, like the story of his family (which would tie beautifully back to canon, as well as the stock photos in the frame’s purpose in the movie).
Emma, despite the difference having parents has, doesn’t feel like Emma. Nor does Henry. The closest you got was Killian, and even there a little more adaptation would’ve struck the perfect balance between characters and movie. (But this isn’t set in stone, I’m only at chapter 8, you might’ve improved since then..)
That said, I commend the idea, because a mash-up like this was a great idea, and it’s obvious you put a lot of thought into this, even if the execution falls a bit short in my opinion.
Keep writing, and don’t take this as personal criticism. Thanks for your time and effort to put a good story out there. It just could be even better. :-)

Oh my! That was an eventful chapter! Glad Emma finally realized Graham is an ass... hope she was smart enough to get a new phone since ge was hacking hers to stalk her?! Hopefully once she gets over the shock she'll be happy Killian is Henry's biological father and not psycho Graham.

Im si happy you updated 3 ahhhh I can’t wait to see what happens with the big news!

I’m so glad to read an other chapter from this marvelous fic ! When I see the new chapter I can’t believe it ! I love this fic. I finally know how Emma takes the news . Of course Graham isn’t the father and Killian totally can prove it. Thanks Killian to hijack this pregnancy .
“Pirate ships are better”
You make me laugh so much with your fic, I can’t wait to see what’s come next !
And you give me hope because I also have a fic to end so if you can finish yours 4 years later I can finish mine one day or an other . I hope you’re ok because you said life was hard with you.
Thanks for your fic, thanks for your chapter and thanks for writing what comes next.
(I hope you will understand me because English isn’t my language )

So happy to see this back! I hope everything's okay and you're okay!

So glad you updated. Loved it. Can't wait for more.

Pleeeeeease do something with this story - I need closure! It's an amazing story and I love reading it but it makes me sad every time I get to the end and remember you've not updated since you said you were going to finish it. Please continue with it, it would be such a shame to see it stay unfinished

I don't wannna sound greedy but I'm greedy. Do you have plans to continue this fic?i love it

Wish you could have continue with this. Would love to know what happens next.

Oh my god you didn't. IM DYING HERE I NEED MORE. PLEASE update soon I'm not sure I can handle this much longer!

Thank you for the update! I really love your take on this story and am extremely happy to see that you will be finishing it (or attempt to as you've noted!)

I do not participate much in fandom anymore and no longer have my fandom Tumblr page. But I still read a ton of CS fic! And am excited to continue to read this as long as you remain inclined to complete. Good luck dear! Lovely sneak peek :)

Cool, looking forward to the update, awesome story btw

Thank you for the update and sneak peek I cannot wait to read more