I love this story and would love to see more.
Great work

This is an absolutely amazing story. The writing is extremely detailed and the plot is absolutely amazing. I love your oc, I always wanted someone to do a transforming (canine) oc and I can't believe I finally found one, and an extremely good one too. I can't wait for the next update c:

I was really excited for an update, but um...?

I love your story so far! Love the detail you pour into it makes me feel like I'm there! I'm just not sure what this "authors note" has to do with the story.

Woo! I wonder would she stay with Jack at the game station or leave with the Doctor. Does she have long life like Time Lords? I'm assuming her race does that's why they're assigned to Time Lords and stuff. Just assuming! Can't wait when you get up there :D

Giod start. But whats a Vaihtaja? first u thought it was humanoid. Then u mentioned puppy, pack and collar. V are humanoid dogs?

Love this story very unique! Can't wait for more and merry Christmas!

Another excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what you do now that Jack and Khaz are on the TARDIS.
Merry Christmas.
Until next time.

This is AWESOME!
Please continue to update! ;)

A couple of great chapters. I love the internal dialogue we're getting from Khaz. And how oblivious Jack was to her warnings.
Until next time.

This is really good so far and I can't wait to read more.
Until next time.