This is good! I like it!

That. Was. Heartbreaking. TTTT

Wow, this really makes you think. I've never thought about Kalluto and Alluka like this before, and this makes me want to cry for poor Kalluto. Great work!

Goodness, you portrayed Kalluto's emotions perfectly.

I love Alluka, but this fanfiction pushed me onto Kalluto's side and made me think of Alluka with disdain.

I also wanted to scream at Kalluto to make him tell Killua exactly how he feels and force Killua to listen.

Of course, I still love Alluka because how can you not, but damn, this is amazing.

Yes, yes, yES. I really love this SO much! I've wanted to see a fic where someone captured the EXACT relationship I've always imagined between Killua and Kalluto (so sad, really), and you did PERFECTLY!

I think you portrayed Kalluto well! This is exactly how I'd picture him, tbh. Quietly protesting, suffering, hoping. I just wish you hadn't made the poor baby hurt. ;;

(The sad thing is that when I RP Kalluto and speak to Killua's they all have pretty much the same reaction as your Killua did when Kalluto confronted him as he left will Alluka and I cry this is so sad my baby)

I also seriously love the style you used in writing this; it was beautiful, and heartfelt, and adfhklo I just am in so much love right now, thANK YOU.

(:Mizune

Aw, so sad! Alluka is my favorite HxH character, but i love Kalluto too. It's interesting to look at how Kalluto feels about the whole Alluka thing. The poor kid just wants to hang out with big brother, but Alluka gets all his attention. It's lonely being a middle child.
Yup, i hear it's really hard to move in a girl's kimono.

Heyy I am also doing the hunter x hunter secret santa on tumblr! I think u captured kalluto's view really well! This is soo like him

That was so sad but very good. You nailed it with Kalluto thoughts and emotions toward Killua. I really liked this story.

i cant say if kalluto is in character , because i dont know much about him.
but i like how you make an history that dont have any of the protagonist (Gon ,Killua, Kurapika, Leorio)as a protagonist.