I was so surprised that this turned into the last chapter. I enjoyed it. Good job.

Well done.

Well done. Silvia would be proud. You took maiming to a new level. Ouch!

I totally see this could have been the way it went. Trust Malcom beware of Laurel! I wonder if there is more than one Lazarus Pit.

Ted? Don't remember who he is or what he did in the series! I like him in your story.

Very good alternative. I like it.

You did good. I cannot tell where or if it happened differently.

Love it.

AWESOME chapter.

I really like the fact that Barry brought Oliver back. I'm wondering whether Barry to carry Oliver. We just have not seen it in the series. I do not mean that it would be wrong. I'm just wondering.

Malcolm was confused. XD

Oliver and Ra's discussion was good.
I really hope that you write a sequel )

The best part:
Oliver turned to Barry. "I for one can't tell you how much I appreciate this."
Barry was surprised to hear the catch in Oliver's voice, but he quickly schooled his features to hide his amazement at Oliver's display of vulnerability.
"The least I can do for my favorite mentor. However, I do need to go soon. So…are we certain we want to leave Ra's where he is? What's going to prevent him from trying to kidnap you again, Oliver?"

Cute aaaw.

Barry, this hero ! I like how you end the story. Ra's is not dead, same thing for th heros. And, oooh too cute, some Olicity's time at the end.
It was a wonderfull journey :)

I can't believe I didn't read all of your stories before, but now I read them, and I want more !

Great chapter. I was just thinking that the body I saw on FB today is in better shape than Oliver was in the show at the time. I wondered at the time if they just wanted Ra's to look better! Not sure that is the word I want to use.

A carnival ride! Now that is a scary thought! I had forgotten it was Thea. Too bad we couldn't frame Laurel and hand her over.

How did Oliver know about the trial by combat? He only knew in the show because Malcom told him

I love it.