That's.. that's not how a hymen works... but I suppose thats probably what they thought back then..
This is great and I really hope you continue it

I like this please update~

Goodness, your OC is annoying as hell. She acts like some insolent little 14 year old with her temper tantrums. By that. I mean THIS DAY AND AGE annoying little girls. Not how one would act in the 1870s. I think that’s what people forget when they write these types of stories. They shape their characters and add in personalities and attitudes from how people act in the 21st century. You’re OC fits in perfectly with the whiny, spoiled little girls of this century who when they don’t get what they want, they throw a fit. That’s possibly why I’m finding myself hating your OC and am honestly rooting for Klaus or Kol to rip her heart out, to silence her annoying little mouth.
The concept of your story is fantastic. I love the idea of Damon having a daughter, although the amount of flashbacks are quite annoying and I have yet to figure out why Elijah’s are important with whoever he’s being all secret with. You’re writing style is flawless and has a natural flow that’s easy to follow and it’s not choppy.
It’s just your OC I am finding annoying as hell and making it hard to keep reading this.

Dang, is it bad that I really want more chapters even though I know you haven’t updated this story in 4 years?
Cause I really like this story

An eternal virgin, yet she could become quite experienced
That would be hard to explain
“Hey, my body’s a virgin but I’m not, I’ve had sex countless times and had to lose my virginity every time.”
Joy

I really like this story. It’s interesting.

I just found this story and I love it. I have read other stories from you but for whatever reason never saw this one until today and read the whole thing. Please tell me this isn't discontinued. I need to know what happens next especially with how you ended thing please update soon.

Noo, I just found this and read it in less than a day
I've read a couple of your stories and they're all great, but please tell me you haven't completely abandoned this? I realize that it's been over a year since you last updated and all but I figured it wouldn't hurt to ask.
I really liked how you wrote Kol, since you gave him that complexity that makes him...him I guess.
Anyways, I love your writing and I really hope you pick this back up some day

I love this!

This is it?! I loved this story! Please at least continue it for rosalie to meet her father again!

Cool story.

Good story. I think Damon would have been a good father if he had a child, after all he was great with Stefan growing up. He makes Rosalie leave to protect her from Stefan and himself, but was too late to save her in the end.

I think Kol didn’t grasp the length of his fascination for Rosalie when he turned her, probably because it’s something he didn’t experienced for a long time (if he ever did). There are something strong between them but I don’t think it’s all about the sire bond.

I hope you will continue this story one day.

I love Rosalie's personality and love her and Kol's relationship! Update soon please.

u haven't updated "As I Kay Dying" in TWO years. I really that

Super histoire j'espère pouvoir lire la suite très bientôt super début...