I like the words you chose...great one shot!

Nice one shot, well written and a delight to read.

Enjoyed the story. Great tags, sometimes hard to write without using 'said'

Nicely Done.

That was really good! I liked it a lot! You should do more stuff like this! :D

Oooh, interesting setup, Van, and well written.

Gibbs and DiNozzo have such a great relation - somewhere between boss and employee/surrogate father and son - and your short little ficlet mirrors that perfectly, and adds some intriguing drama to boot.

Lovely story.

Oh no! Poor Tony! Nice h/c, tho. :D

Nicely done. :)

Good one shot.

i really missed a hurt Dinnozzo fic. thank you so much!

Good...wished it could have been longer...please write another.

Cute story

nice one-shot, and great challenge - I always have a problem not just writing 'he said'/she said', and it takes more time to find the right word than to actually write the rest of the story!

Good story, nicely done.