This is just perfection to me. A cute, sweet, hot first time for a potentially dysfunctional couple. I loose my dignity for this kind of things :D if you ever decide to write something else I'll certainly read it. I'll go dip myself in a bucket of ice now.

This is amazing I always love seeing the passion between May and Maxie super well written and ooo boy *fans self*

Oh boy oh boy did I enjoy this -I almost feel guilty now for having Sapphire instead of Ruby.

AhHaHa I love this my arceus can't stop reading

I've actually been meaning to leave a review for this for a couple of days, but damn that was hot I can't stop reading it. Also when I went to look at the comments and I saw you commented on your own fic, that was the best thing I've ever seen. Gotta keep that redorb shipping alive.

wait I can review my own fic wtf

cool

This is badaaaasss :3 loved it, love everything about it. I'm really digging the way people write the new version of Maxie of Omega Ruby - it's so different from how I write him (I'm still old school, I base him on his first incarnate in Ruby haha) but in the best kind of way, he's so lovable and the idea of his primary identity being that of the intellectual is just great.

Anyway this is hella rad (and sexy, my god had to fan myself a few times ;) so delightfully spicy and well written to boot!) keep truckin, I would love to see more!