why has god abandoned us

Are you eziam one?
PLS
STOP THIS TOURTURE
and i tottally didnt get a boner reading this

9.5/10 whoever you are needs more water

Pretty good story 4/5.

IDK why but this song goes perfect with this chapter watch?vawY49_JRyXI&listPLG-jVznG5DT058HbZF5IroDi282fYw2Qc&index8

I don't blame Shawn, everyone else is being a dick to him for falling in love. I mean it's not bestiality seeing as Maize is an intelligent being. But people are stupid. Thanks for writing this 'Bunches of Honey' I really enjoyed it.

I'm having a big ASS boner right now.

I just wanted to say that I greatly enjoyed the story and I can't wait to see what happens in your seat sequel.

YEAS! Good lemon dude, good lemon... holds han c up 4 high fuve*

This story was great, looking forward to the next one
5/5 stars

In all honesty I agree with Shawn wanting to move yeah some people may find pokemon x trainer to be wrong but ask yourself this question what would happen if your pokemon fell in love with you.

Great story! I can't wait until the sequel.

[Trying to stay in character] Great writing Maize! The story was amazing. Deep down I wish it wouldn't end, and I'm a bit upset that it is, but if there's no more to be told than there's nothing I can do about it. Although, I did get a little confused when you first mentioned that you fell in love with Shawn. It was hard to tell why you fell in love with him. I assume it would be a misunderstanding on my part, as everything usually is. *sigh* Anyway, have a great day!
Best Regards,
Ryen

what the fuck! who the hell knocks on the door of a house that someone is haveing sex in!

great story minor writing errors but they don't take away from the the story since it is being told by a pokemon so errors could be ignored as pokemon are not the best writers so other than that good job keep doing what you are doing.