Please update!

I didnt fix all of it but i cleaned it up a little for you, no offense but it was a little painful to read, good story line though. The -zzz- are page break/time skips

At first glance it was clear that he really hated Inaho. When they had first met face to face he thought Inaho was an ungrateful and cruel bastard for trying to kill him. He had saved Inaho when he was about to be killed by one of the knights but, Inaho, still thought of him as an enemy and shot his plane. Ever since then he had held hatred for Inaho that consumed his whole heart and no one could change the way he felt. Not even if that person is the princess.
"You still won't forgive him?" Asseylum implored.
"I'm sorry but that is something I can't do, princess." He apologized.
"Inaho kun is a very good guy." She tried again to help change Slaine’s opinion of Inaho. "At that time he thought you were a Martian, so -"
"Even so it doesn't change the fact that he tried to kill someone who wad trying to help him." Slaine quickly bowed and walked away feeling guilty for cutting off his princess’ words but he felt over come by anger.
He was fine with talking to everyone in the battleship, even having gone so far as to start a nice friendship with Inaho’s sister. Inaho is the only one he still gave a cold shoulder to. When Inaho is around him Slaine would ignore him and refuse to answer any of his questions or attempts at conversation. He even called him 'orange' refusing to call Inaho by his name. As always his princess tried to help him and Inaho to become friends but its not possible. There is no way in hell he wants to be friend with that jerk.
-zzz-
"Would you like me to help you, Inko?" He asked as he tied the apron around his waist.
"Thank you, Slaine." She smiled widely when she saw him.
Taking a knife Slaine start to peel the potato skins with speed and accuracy, which makes him reliable in the kitchen. It is their group’s turn to cook for everyone and Slaine always offered his help when he has nothing to do in the ship. The princess already has Eddelrittuo to handle most of her stuff and there were already people hired to fix his plane.
"You're quite good Slaine." Inko complimented.
"Thank you. My mom used to teach me how to work in a kitchen when I was younger." He says and handed her the potato that he had peeled.
"That's good! Then can you please teach me how to cook when you're free?" She took the nearest stool and sat beside him. "I heard from the others that you know hundreds of recipes."
"Not that many." He chuckles as he hands the girl another knife.
"You’re so cute when you laugh!" She looked closer at his face. "KAWAII!"
It was then others girls in the kitchen surrounded them and started to giggle as well from seeing the cute face Slaine was making. He continue to smile awkwardly at them as he felt a bit nervous about being surrounded by so many girls.
"Um . . ." He tried to find the words to get the girls to give him some space.
"What are you guys doing?" They all turn to see Marito leaning against the door with Inaho beside him. "Get back to work!"
The girls pout and grumbled as they walked away to continue with their job. Slaine simply sighed before his smile turned into a frown when he saw Inaho. Inko watched as Slaine looked away angrily and sighs as well knowing full well that this person hated her friend from the bottom of his heart. For a quick second she thought she saw Inaho look sad and disappointed.
"Slaine, you're still angry at Inaho?" She whispers questioningly.
"Of course,” he scoffed, “every time I look at Orange’s face my heart beats wildly and I feel like punching him!" He said in anger. In his rage he accidentally cut the potato in half, the knife pressed deep into his skin causing it to bleed. He was shocked out of his moment of total anger as he felt his blood flow, dying the potato red as it soaked it in. Inko was about to take his hand to treat his injury but Inaho appeared and wrapped a cloth around Slaine’s hand before she had a chance.
"Orange?" Inaho didn't say anything as he forcefully pulled Slaine from the kitchen.
"Heart beating wildly, huh?" Her eyebrow twitched as she watched Slaine get towed out of the kitchen. "Could it be…" she trailed off, starring questioningly into space, before she finished her sentence in the privacy of her mind, 'That Slaine is in love with Inaho.'
-zzzzz-
"Let go!" Slaine exclaimed as he was being pulled along the hall from the firm grip on his hand.
"You're hand is bleeding and needs to be tended to immediately." Inaho says emotionlessly and continue walking.
Upon arriving at the infirmary Inaho started mumbling something under his breath when he notice the lack of the doctor’s presence and asked Slaine to sit down. Slaine did as he was told while gripping his injured hand tightly just starting to feel the pain now that it had been released from the numbing grip of Inaho. This injury was nothing compared to the time he was tortured, he thought darkly.
"Let me see your hand." Inhao demanded in his ever calm and in control voice.
Slaine glared up at him, hissing in pain when Inaho pulled his hand away and untying the cloth.
"That's deep." Inaho stated as he inspected the fresh wound.
"I can treat the wound myself, you don't have to take care of it." Slaine bit out as he tried to tug his hand out of Inaho’s grip.
This wasn’t new to Slaine. Every time he got hurt he would treat the wound himself knowing full well he couldn’t depend on anyone to take care of him. But . . .
"Stay still." Inaho commanded before he start to lap at the small pool of blood that had welled up in Slaine’s palm after the wrap was taken off.
Slaine flinched from the sudden contact, then watched in fear and curiosity as Inaho continued to lap at his sliced flesh. When Inaho look up to make an eye contact with him Slaine’s heart started to beat wildly, as always, and the temperature of his body rose drastically.
"St-stop. Ah . . .a . . . .uh . . ." Slaine stuttered. Inaho place his unoccupied hand on Slaine’s thigh, the other still gripping Slaine’s wrist like a vise so Slaine couldn’t pull it away. "N-no!"
"Cute." Inaho teased. There were droplets of blood on his bottom lip before Inaho swept his tongue across catch then before they dripped down his chin.
‘I hate him.’ Slaine thought furiously.
He should be hating him.
"Slaine." Inaho whispered his name in a husky voice as a slight smile curved his lips.
Since when did Inaho smile? Isn't he one of those people who doesn't show much emotion?
"Show me more." Inaho urged in a dazed sort of hushed voice.
He finished licking up all the blood and pushed Slaine down onto the bed.
"I want to see more of yourself." The husky tone to his voice deepened, as did the hazy trance like quality.
"Ah!" Slaine screamed from shock and terror when Inaho started to strip him of his clothes with ease.
-zzzz-
"I hate him, I hate him, I hate him." Slaine chanted as he pulled the blanket of the hospital bed up and around him his uninjured had clutched tight in the sheets at his neck.
Yuki patted the boy’s head sympathetically. The truth is even she was surprise when she heard Slaine’s screaming and came running, but instead of seeing him getting attacked by an enemy she saw her younger brother sitting astride Slaine’s thighs. Seeing Inaho trying to take off Slaine’s pants told her exactly what was happening.
"He is evil! He tried to rape me!" Slaine cried out.
"Slaine." She says his name. "I think my brother’s just having trouble in expressing his feelings."
"What do you mean?" Slaine asked increduliously.
"I'm sure you already know my brother hardly shows his feelings." He nods. "Well, when you first came here and stepped out from that plane, my brother went speechless for the first time in his life. That is the first time Ive see him blush like that and I knew at that moment he had fallen in love at first sight."
Did she-?
Did she just say-?
"He’s in love with me?" Slaine felt a shiver go down his spine when he thought of Inaho.

-10 days until Slaine falls in love-

Plz! Keep on going with this story! It's soooo good! I love it! I want more!

God dang it! There needs to be more of this pairing cuz they so hot!

I need more!

That moment when I finish reading this chapter and went to click the next button but it isn"t there... ＿

We need moooaarreee
so.. an update please? (*︶*).｡.:*

Whens the next Chapter coming?! I want more! Too good

How's cuttie they are.

continue please...T.T

The continuation plis T-T

Wuaaa next please

Ohhh I need the next chapter ;;
This chapter was something ... hot (? I was surprised when the Inaho said it blowjob hahaha and I love when he said he would always love him3
Beautiful as always :3
I'll wait for the next chapter :)

This is really good! Keep gping. xD.

Anyway, you should change the rating to M. It's starting to get a little touchy.

Hello, i'm new on your fanfic and i'm so in love with this / is so cute and I love this pairing so much
I hope you can upload the next chapter soon :3
Thanks for this cute thing :)
Pd: I'm sorry for my english, this isn't my language .

Im laughing harder than i should be ( harder than inaho if you get what im saying a-wink wink)