100/10 wholesome af

This is over adorable! The two are hot and funny! And Ed is empathetic as he always being. He shows as much sympathy for as he does for Envy at the end of fma. Such a romanticist. Thank you for the wonderful fic.

I like this story a lot! When I reached the end, I was really disappointed that it was done. I loved it!

I like smut that actually has some substance. This story has it. Well done.

I died of cute! It's pretty rare to find a cute and fluffy EdVy story. I read it like a book, non-stop until I reached the unexpected ending. I can't say that I disliked any bit of this story. Seriously though, keep up the amazing work

I just want to say thank you, this is both a wonderful story, and a very informitive one, you have let me relise that, yeah, people arent honest and have let me learn a bit about sex, so thank you

If Only Major Louis Armstrong was Roy xD

via chap fifteen if it were me I'd look inti changing into like thriller or whatever

#AlphonseApproves

*shakes head sadly* trying to do good in the wrong way got you arrested Mr. Nicholas. That's a damn shame.

I couldn’t stop reading, 14 hours, including time to sleep and dinner, that’s how much time passed until I finish it, and, for be since, I’m not used to read in English (come on, is difficult to read something that is not in your natal language, even if you’re a little good in that language, so, read in English is something I don’t use to do), but I wanted some good thing to read (inspiration stuff, I’m about to write an au of these two, and of course, the “I want to forget all the shit I read this afternoon” because find something good of FMA in Spanish was impossible. Or maybe I don’t research so good… Humm), and I really love it, I fall asleep at 3 —almost 4— of morning just for reach the chapter #13, and ween I wake up the first thing I do was read the next one, was awesome, really, is so cute and romantic and a little dark… Hell, I’m about to tell my friends to read it (even if my girlfriend cut my neck later), is just… *sighs*, sorry if I bored you whit my not-so-important stuff (I know I do, I always get out of the important subject uwu), or if my English is a bullshit , but I need to act a little like a crazy fangirl after read something like that *put a sweet full of chocolate heart here*, I really, really love this history.

*cry* why can’t be so good fanfics in Spanish TTnTT?

PD: yep, my rw is a horseshit, but, well… The important stuff is I let one saying how much I loved it, no?

PD 2: the end was so, so, so cu~te (and hot)!

Loved it! I am really hoping someday you will do a sequel to this story! It would be nice to see how they would be end of the year seniors.

I can't stop reading this over and over again
ugh
its so cute and sexy and
I CAN'T HANDLE IT

OK so I just finished this all at once and I should have gone to sleep like 6 hours ago...
this was so cute and funny

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was nice and sweet. and very sappy