where is the logic? Tywin didn't care what happened to Robert, and he would have been glad of it

good stuff

I love this story so much. I hope you continue

Spelling is atrocious.
Examples: Starrk Stark, Theron Theon.
Just bad.

amigo no puedo esperar el siguiente capitulo cuando lo publicas

Dude can’t wait for the next chapter

Absolute cock-up of a story. Flimsy logic behind most actions of almost everyone involved to make their actions fit close to canon. Ridiculous, cartoonish behavior from the main character who is all bark and no bite.

And then there's the super secret assassination group that spans the world. Where any idiot can post a contract on anyone and no one can stop them, yet every important person is somehow still alive.

And the idea that Rhaella could somehow get pregnant and have a bastard son both without the realm knowing about it and without Aerys burning her and/or the child is just too ridiculous to even imagine.

Just not a good story.

And again, a worthless little cunt.

It's hilarious how you seem to think this is an awesome character.

And once more he proves himself a pathetic little shit. Daario Naaharis mocks him to his face, hits on his sister(to-be-wife?) and acts like a little shit and he just lets it go, like the little bitch he is, like he always does.

Threats and words, but never backs it up. Worst character I've seen in a while.

Your main character is such a little bitch. All he does is whine and yell. He's threatened like 20 people with death so far and yet to properly swing a sword. It's a pathetic attempt at making a badass character.

You spell like a second grader.

J

I hope you continue this story it's great

Fuck did you reduce Kushina as a mere horse :D

so is arya his daughter or not? and if not why would cat accidently confess like that?