Reviews for Our Little Adventures
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 6 . 8/30
So much fun!
Sandman8717 chapter 1 . 8/27
Please keep writing this story
MisterVoorhees chapter 1 . 6/13
Please continue!
MisterVoorhees chapter 1 . 6/12
Please continue it was just getting to the best part!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16
Sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Loved it , can’t wait to read more
Guest chapter 6 . 11/24/2019
K, after 1,5 years you updated a fic of yours but it is very noticeable you haven't been sitting still in those 1,5 years.
You progressed so much.
The interpunction, use of words and details
I didn't like the idea of this story turned M-rated because you kept very close to their chabarcters but it still felt so in place especially the ending wher Luffy says he wants to cuddle
Counting till three to see each other and careful was so pure
I didn't know your writing could be better but you proved me wrong
Monkey.D.Luffy0 chapter 6 . 11/23/2019
Well..., this is one of the top rated fics I've ever read! Like,each and every part of it was simple,yet... refreshing. Like,this was the most detailed chapter I've ever read in my life. Each and every line was completely detailed. Like,their interaction was so plain and realll just like the canon story. The unfathomable trust between them,and many other scenes were so mesmerising! There were some little flaws and all,but still it's literally super amazingg. And yes,this felt a little bit different from your daily writing style! Idk,if I'm the only one who felt the difference, it's small,but still there. But I lovee thiss one and thanks for this amazinggg piece of arttt! UwU
Guest chapter 6 . 11/23/2019
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OMG! Thxs! I just have this to say:
\( *ω* )/\( *ω* )/\( *ω* )/\( *ω* )/
Thank you so much! Great work! Keep doing with your writing "Teacher"!
And: did Ace knew about them?
XD
Dakeshy69 chapter 6 . 11/22/2019
Nice to know you finally embraced your role as sex ed Teacher.
it would have been nice to see interactions between garp and nami tho i cant complain freaking 8k words and i know how hard you been working too. Overall GREAT chapter (Plz add some more funny Soyji (hehe) Moments) and yes i just put brackets in brackets
Guest chapter 5 . 10/17/2019
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Found a fic of yours and liked, then noticed that you had other one that I read and liked, so now I'm reading all of them from the latest one to the newest and this one here...gods! Please make more! Its SO CuTe and well done and if you didn't made the idea of the next one I would be content with the end. But now I want and need the next one!
So if possible, make one more!
And great work!
XD
Guest chapter 5 . 8/29/2019
continually
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 5 . 8/17/2019
you're not planning on making Ch. 6 and so on did you not? π_π please don't stop writing..
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 2 . 8/14/2019
can't get enough.. :3
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2018
Great story, but when's the next chapter?
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