I need a new chapter please make a new one

Will you ever update? Will Jack ever go back?
Have one of the Guardians find Jack. That would be cool.

Please continue this! I wanna read more!

please you have to continue this is amazing and there is so much you can do with this

this story is awesome! please continue!

Please continue!

please update this.

Great work on the story

Do more soon!

I really like Jack and Pitch's relationship. Pitch's parenting kind of reminds me of the how the Witch in the musical "Into the Woods" would love her daughter and tell her the outside was dangerous but was hurting her and seeing she couldn't stop her child from wanting to leave their home and see the world. It'll be really interesting to see how this plays out.

I love the story so far keep it going

Well Jesus Christ! This is proving to be an interesting start... You get some cookies and a follow! (::) (::) (::)

I really want to see where this goes. Please update soon.

I really love your Pitch and I think you really nailed the loving but desperately protective pattern of thought to him. I look forward to seeing Pitch and Jack's relationship evolve. Great chapter

Jack is so adorable! I love him! Nice first chapter!