I love this so freaking much! I always love your stories and I adore your blog on tumblr! :)

I'm glad Jemma is enjoying it more. Aaaww Nick and Elizabeth, I see what you did there :p

Aaaaawwww she's always been pretty! So damn sweet!

Aaww Skye is totally that friend who knows that Jemma doesn't think she can be damn sexy, so she's going to dress her up making Fitz' jaw drop on the damn floor :D

This was a very sweet chapter. Liked Coulson's fatherly approach at fixing Fitz's tie ... nice to know that the new SHIELD's budget isn't so bad that they opted for 'clip-ons' :-D

Wondering if AC's offence to the gowns of Skye and Jemma have less to do with the costs involved and more to the fact that they are a tad to effective and revealing?

Now on to 3.

Merry Christmas.

W

Aww, so cute!

This is only chapter one, but already I am loving this story. I could not imagine a better 'odd-couple' than Jemma and Hunter. Why do I think their Mission together is going to end up a dismal failure ... or at the very least require hasty intervention by the other Agent's not to blow their cover :-).

I remember the Tracks-Episode with fondness, that's the one where Simmons and Coulson masquerade as a father and daughter ... a daughter who had significant abandonment issues towards a father who had left her and her mother. The scene just made me laugh ...

Simmons: "You never had time for her! But you had time for your work ... and your Prostitutes!"
Coulson (whispering annoyingly as it is clear Jemma has just gone-off-script) : "Prostitutes?! Really? Plural?"
Great scene.

And it looks as though Skye has an ulterior motive in wanting to get Jemma all dolled up.

And poor Fitz, he and Jemma have yet to resolve their 'issues' with one another yet and now he has to stay in the background and watch as she 'dates' another person ... even if he knows its all a fake, it would still cut him deep.

Now onto chapter 2 ;-)

W