Is interesting how the A/N are newer than the chapters anyway unless you are dead this is another moronic stupidity of the so uncall "write BLOCK" in small words stupid story long Moronic drama, short real information and dead as the author.

Just bumbled into this story and found it enjoyable. Please don't fall into the writing traps of strength and massive hordes of minions. please post soon.

Really good story. Hope it's not abandoned?

Loving this story so far, and hope you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

1 for Hermione's parents being male Emma and female Dan :-)

Great story hope to see more from you soon. I hope you are still working on this story.

Please update soon I really enjoy reading this story

I've always been partial to the name "Dork Lard Moldyshorts" myself, but that might be a bit too flippant for this story, so I like what you chose to go with. And having read scores of HP fics, I can honestly say it's the first time I've heard that name used for old Tom.

I like how you went about calling in the Life Debts for each person, although I will say that I don't think it was necessary to make Ginny forget about horcruxes because I don't think she knew about them (unless I missed something in this story about her knowing that they planned on going after them), so it would have only been necessary to make Ron forget. I also liked the fact that you kept Ron out of the hunt altogether. I've seen other authors do that, though not by calling in his Life Debt and having him forget about all of it, but their reasons for doing so haven't always been the logical kind that you laid out. It's usually because Ron has made an ass of himself and alienated himself from the other two to the point of exclusion or because Harry and Hermione are together and want some "alone time" without a jealous Ron there to ruin the mood. I don't like the Ron/Hermione romance and never have. It made no sense that Hermione would fall for Ron and never will make sense to me.

Finally, I like the logical/non-magical approach that Harry and Hermione decided to take for your version of the hunt and war. I never understood why Rowling introduced the concept of House Elves, showed use what Dobby could do, but then didn't utilize any House Elf help until they had to escape Malfoy Manor and the brief mention of their taking up arms to fight during the Battle of Hogwarts. Well... that's not entirely true. I understood that she did it so that the trio had to struggle alone to do what needed to be done, so that the danger of the hunt was more palpable and so that there could be conflict amongst the trio so things would get more desperate and Ron would have a reason to use the deluminator for something other than turnings lights on and off. But I digress...

If they'd thought to have Dobby's help from the beginning, they'd have been able to stay somewhere other than a tent, been warm and well fed and been able to get from place to place much more efficiently. They might also have been able to get some kind of sense of what was going on at Hogwarts, so Ron wouldn't have had to rely on conveniently overheard conversations and a wireless radio to find out about his family's well being. They might not have known what they were doing any better than they did in canon, but at least they wouldn't have been miserable doing it.

It is the 2nd best name I've heard, just after Voldewhore.

Another great story as yet incomplete - again - More chapters are needed.

update please

i like your story and hope you continue

Awesome idea!

A good story, fast paced and building in drama chapter by chapter. I'm liking the house elf army and scorched earth policy, they're new ideas to meand after 1300 odd HP stories, I don't read too many new ideas! Keep up the good work.

I am really looking forward to the next chapters. :)