Oh God, well that was... sensational. These are my two favorite characters in a ship that somehow, against all odds kind of works, when done right. Your dialog and behavior for both of them are great, love that its's purely Raven's POW. Perfect length too. Thank you so much!

Ugh. You write these two too well.

This is incredibly well written, it honestly felt like it had been taken straight out of the show. :)

The way you described Murphy in this was absolutely flawless. Like holy shit it was so believable and I'm not just saying it because it was smut! Ahh loved it. I'm gonna go creep your page and find more of your stories :)

You are a wonderful storyteller :) it's nice to finally find a good Murphy fic!

Love this so far... please say you're continuing

Please please please tell me you're going to continue this. It's really good!

LOVE!
This is such an under shipped ship, and I'm glad to see I have found other kindred spirits
An amazing story so far, hope that you update soon! :)

Oh. My. God. You HAVE to continue. I've just discovered this ship today, and it's too sad that there are not many fics. This story has too many tension and chemistry not to continue it.
So I really hope you are not abandoning it. Looking forward to more.

Oh my fucking God YESSSSSSSS.
And is it bad that I feel all fangirl-excited that this roommate situation of theirs - and their quarters roo of course - is becoming "a thing"? I'm so happy I could die! And this sex was SO DAMN PERFECT FOR THEM. Oh my God. You are epic.

Oh boy was that flipping but also a bit sad at the same time. Murphy saying he gets it she's using him made my heart beak for him but I get why raven has done it and really I felt it obvious while she wanted it to be nothing ie ended up having a bigger effect on her than she was expecting. It was good to see how murphy helped her at the end - it shows another layer of murphy that I'm sure exists we just haven't seen all of him yet.

I was expecting bellamy to make an unexpected trip back- it would have been amusing.

Great chapter I really want expecting what happened. Actually I'm not sure what I was expecting but it was great- as usual :)

Always a Bellarke fan, but I can dig Murphaven lol

Ahh yay, so happy there's a new chapter :D

I love that Raven's sort of falling for him even if she doesn't exactly know it just yet, but her keeping tabs on him gives me hope.

Raven is just perfect, I love her a lot!

YESS! You are brilliant for writing this, there really isn't enough Raven/Muphy fics out there. I think it's pretty funny the pair are a mess before hand and that things go wrong. These two are a hot mess and it's perfect! Definitely need more crazy sex between Raven and Murphy!

The line about their monsters liking each other killed me, bwahaha :D

I will laugh so much if someone has actually walked passed the door and heard them. I live for the day that Murphy teases Bellamy about Clarke, so maybe Bellamy can do the same but about Raven!

I can only hope there's gonna be another chapter, love these a lot!

-Sophie

I... don't know what to say but I LOVE THIS WOW. PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY IT IS PERFECT

Holy shit. Both of them are perfectly in character. Are you going to continue this? Because there's totally chemistry there and hot Murphy x Raven hookups are just the thing I never thought I'd need and now can't live without.