Reviews for Stolen Sakura
Chivalricangel chapter 12 . 6/24
“You're right it's probably my imagination,” - nooo, Naruto just when you were catching on to something. I liked that little argument they had about who was going to get Naruto. It reminds me that I keep changing who's side I'm on in this story. Sometimes I root for Naruto, sometimes I root for Sasuke, but I can say with confidence that I never root for Sakura. Whenever she's in an argument I always take the other persons side. It's interesting that she has so much power to make him fold like that and accept her terms of friendship. At least from that position there's a chance for things to progress. Ah the truth about Naruto's actions finally revealed, while I assumed that was what happened before it feels differently now his actions were explicitly mentioned. It's hard to believe he would do something like this, drunk or not. In this story he's been very nice. He just snapped I guess.

This really enjoyed this story. I was addicted to the drama like an addict. I loved how the characters were always able to get under my skin. I felt conflicting emotions I didn't usually feel and for the most part didn't know how to express in my reviews (sorry about that lol.) What I would have given to see the chaos of these characters on mission. It would have been so entertaining. Alas. After taking a brief scroll through the comments it's regrettable about some of the negativity it's faced. For a supposed haven of creativity fanfiction can be incredibly stifling and conformist. Stories that stick to generic formula's of what is supposedly acceptable are rewarded and unique concepts that push the boundaries of creativity get slammed. It's unfortunate to see. If you're reading this I hope you continue to put your mind to use, regardless of what you chose to write. Your work is appreciated.
Chivalricangel chapter 11 . 6/24
Naruto's all alone his 'friend' wont speak to him and his girlfriend has gone 'missing.' I would feel sorry for him if he didn't practically try and rape his girlfriend. Yes just like Sasuke thought, sooner or later Sakura and Naruto – if you can even call it a relationship would have to break up, it's the only logical step! But then she took him back! What! Why? It doesn't make sense. Especially as she healed Sasuke's injuries and not her actual boyfriend's.

At least Sasuke's acknowledged what's happened, Sakura's denying it which is disrespectful to both Naruto and Sasuke. When she fucked him in that state, in the back of my mind I was worried that this would happen. That she would regret it the next day. She has no right to be angry here. In fact she's responsible for most of the madness happening in this story. Naruto and Sasuke's silliness wouldn't matter if she had a good head on her shoulders. Ahhh! She made me so angry in this chapter!
Chivalricangel chapter 10 . 6/24
“You're going to catch a cold if you stay in that dress.” If Naruto said that he might have actually got her out of it XD It worked for Sasuke. But that's Sasuke. The traumatic experience must have eroded the superfluous (Naruto) and acted as a catalyst for them to finally stop denying what they want and give into their desires. What they want isn't selfish, the only selfish part is Naruto being strung along for reasons I still don't understand. I think congratulations is in order, hopefully the first step for the blind finally opening their eyes.
Chivalricangel chapter 9 . 6/24
I'm laughing trying to imagine Sasuke dancing. The things he does for her. Knowing his own feelings for Sakura and what he's willing to do for her, you would think he would know that Sakura doesn't have such feelings for Naruto. Drunk Naruto is even sillier than normal Naruto if that was at all possible. How can a future hokage act that way publicly. He was a complete embarrassment. I hoped it would be a wake up call for Hinata but she was still infatuated. It makes it more frustrating that he ignores the one person who accepts him for who he is while obsessively pursuing someone who clearly doesn't care for him. And it looks like Naruto's stupidity just went to a whole other level.
Chivalricangel chapter 8 . 6/23
Sakura burnt vegetables lol. Could it be that Naruto is the best cook in team 7? Nooo Naruto, not more begging again! Sasuke was smirking because Sakura doesn't fulfill his every whim? I think he's misinformed because she doesn't fulfill any of his whims. If the reverse was true with Naruto being injured and Sasuke was asking her to do something, she would abandon Naruto in a heartbeat. The fact that she cleaned Sasuke's house but wont even visit Naruto if the house isn't clean further supports this. She even did his laundry, I don't think that's just because he's injured. “No one would bother you here.” Sasuke was obviously talking about Naruto, more then happy to to pry her away from him and she's more than happy to oblige. About Sakura's point of view, I think I actually prefer it to Sasuke's.
Chivalricangel chapter 7 . 6/23
Ugh, Naruto begging Sakura again. He might as well take a hint, she obviously doesn't like him like that, it seems that she barely tolerates him as a person. I don't know why she sticks with him. Naruto's too blind to see it. Also, could he not see why his actions could have made him feel uncomfortable even if he didn't know he harboured feelings for her. It would be frustrating for anyone. Her criticizing him for letting Sasuke getting hurt was typical of her. She deserved just as much blame as him and she was even watching him. Naruto was too stupid to notice, what was her excuse? The contrast with how she treated Sasuke for his mistake (chidoring himself into the hospital) compared to Naruto says it all.
Chivalricangel chapter 6 . 6/23
“He was wondering how long it would take the dobe to notice.” I think everyone's asking themselves that same question. It's nice that Sasuke stopped denying his feelings and in impressive fashion. The realization happening while being surrounded by the cherry blossoms (Sakura) was some nice symbolism. As a reader I hated that you instantly take him down from the that high when you finally think it's going to be their moment. But from a writing perspective it was brilliant. That scene might have been your best work and I don't say that lightly. The promise of a ripe fruit later in year? Shattered in an instant. The growth of spring abruptly transitioned into an icy winter. Ino was so nice to him, although a little clueless, kind of like Naruto. At least in her case it's justified. Those two seem suited to each other. That chidori scene at the end, oh dear.
Chivalricangel chapter 5 . 6/23
Sakura conveniently didn't mention that the operation would be painful. But worse than the pain for Sasuke was probably the fact that he would have to appear vulnerable in front of her. Sakura said that he was brave, but I guess he'll never know if he was as brave as Naruto. It was good to see that Sasuke was 'grateful' for what Sakura had done for him, but Naruto arrived to interrupt what they were doing. Of course he didn't see anything.
Chivalricangel chapter 4 . 6/23
The cinema scene is the perfect metaphor for Naruto's ignorance. Sasuke putting his hands between his girlfriends legs and Naruto being completely clueless. So absorbed in his own little world. Sakura's “please I'm so thirsty” line to Sasuke – my mind went to the gutter. I expect it was foreshadowing that scene in the bath. When Naruto asked for a goodnight kiss and Sakura said yes I felt bad that he had to ask like that (maybe I'm misinterpreting how long they've been in a relationship for) and even worse that she said yes like it was such a big honour. Sasuke's a glutton for punishment by tagging along, although Naruto didn't give him much choice.
Chivalricangel chapter 3 . 6/19
The inner conflict continues. I'm feeling worse and worse for Sasuke. The jealousy that keeps bubbling to the surface, thinking that Naruto and Sakura are doing it. If he only knew the truth. Sasuke not remembering Hinata's name – I can see that, I can't see him caring that he didn't remember it though. She came out of that scene looking weak, but I feel for her. So far she's in good company in that regard. He burned his breakfast? Lol.
Chivalricangel chapter 2 . 6/19
She seemed uncomfortable talking about her relationship with Naruto. It's to early to tell if it's because she lacked confidence in the relationship or because it was Sasuke she was talking to. Sasuke was awfully possessive when grabbing the pendant. On one hand Naruto is painfully oblivious how his actions could be putting people in difficult positions, on the other hand Sakura clearly isn't the easiest person to work with. She seemed embarrassed the whole chapter, especially around Sasuke. Does she want to be with Naruto or not?
Chivalricangel chapter 1 . 6/19
Sakura seems to have really has moved on. Not being aware of Sasuke's release date from prison and not even noticing him standing right by her. Still he was able to get under her skin by bringing into question her medical competency, she completely folded. Naruto was so clumsy. He didn't inform either of them the situation and so they found out in the worst possible way. Sasuke felt like a voyeur – I felt like a voyeur it was so awkward. Then he volunteers Sakura to fix her arm, he has good intentions but seems so clueless. As with what Sasuke was thinking, something seems wrong.
GTSAJ chapter 12 . 3/10
I love this fic please update
SS4evaluv chapter 12 . 8/23/2019
Please Please update. This story is great and sexy. I love that it's Sasuke who is chasing or will be chasing Sakura since 'This is far from over' great line. I really want him to try and still Sakura away from Naruto. We need more sexy SasuSaku time.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2019
You've made Naruto borderline retarded and Sasuke some sort of perfect Mandingo what the f*** is the point of this garbage?
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