Hi I I just read your most recent story and I hope you decide to continue this story!

Update please? I started crying when I read your most recent story so I stopped. I'm so sorry xx

This is sooooooooooo good i loved this part of the movie the most. Raph was a total boss in the movie can't wait for the second movie anyway u should totally continue part 2 soon I hope. This long review of my random babbling sorry I'm not sorry but this is awesome continue please with 2012 Mikey puppy eyes on top

Hey came here after reading erosion, is this just a one shot?

will you update this? I HOPE YOU DO

continue!

Love it! And yes please do continue! Hopefully going along with the movie that they all survive

Awww that was so great. Love being inside Raph's head at those last moments. Any of them really, but Raphael was interesting because of his little heart felt speech. I think this was very good as a one shot but I do also think that if you wrote a little more it would still be awesome!

Aw, very nice. It would take imminent death to crack open Raph's tough exterior. Enjoyed this piece!

THIS WAS AWESOME! And so totally Raphael! It's the first time of my 36 year life that I read about someone who is going to die and that he is NOT seeing his whole life flashing through his eyes and instead of that thinking about hoch much ist could hurt. Brilliant and in a way totally realistic! Please go on!

Wow. I really like this story and how Raph talks about his feelings as they're going to fall. I didn't see this movie because I thought it would be horrible, but that doesn't mean I won't read stories from it from my favorite authors. I like the way this is starting. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

You are wrong for this! I was so sure this was a one shot, but it has more chapters. BIG KITTEN EYES, post the next part soon.

Awesome so far I was thinking about how no one has tackled raps confession after the fall yet would love you to pursue this great job