Thank you for writing this! I enjoyed it a lot! :)

Awesome job on this story! I love it! Although I was a little confused about what happened with Professor Callaghan and why he had the microbots in this timeline, if Abigail didn't go into the portal this timeline. Or did she? I thought it was a different timeline. I'm not sure what happened with Professor Callaghan this time.
Anyway, awesome job either way! I love it so much - y'all did a great job with how Tadashi would cope with Hiro dying and how it wouldn't be exactly the same as how Hiro acted. I liked how you had many of the same scenes, but Tadashi inserted comments that Hiro didn't, or you changed little stuff like having the microbot on a necklace, etc. (I don't know if you get what I'm trying to say, but I'll stop now cause this is so long.)
Great work!

Oh what? Vincent's been teleported into the BH6 movie canon universe?

But what happens after that?

What happens after this?

Awww I love it!

But I wish there was more... more about for what happened with these two. I mean, what happened to them in the end? Did Kruger find Monique? Did they get back home or...?

Also, what's the backstory with Smith, Kruger, and Monique?

Sssqqquuueeeaaallll! I love it! A beautiful end to a wonderful story!

What ever happened to Callaghan? Abigail? Smith and Vincent?

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Idid not see that end coming! Oh my god, a great little fic! Amazing job! I can't wait until Songdreamerspace catches up with you! I would love to see how Tadashi feels when hiro thinks he's dreaming. Such a great writer you are - I love how you portrayed hiro's thoughts and your writing style!

Hiro's ranting in this chapter made me lose it.
STUPID IDIOT NEEDS TO INTRODUCE HIS HEAD TO A WALL
Oh, goodness, that was funny...

Nice, though I never liked open ended stories but that's just me. Thanks for the ride!

Ok, on chapter seven, I see you couldn't resist the "Almost make it to freedom but not" cliche (just once I'd like to see that not used). I've enjoyed both stories so far, expect a complete review when I reach the end

Nuuuuuuuuu! I don't want it to be over!

Hey there!

First of all, congratulation and thank you very much for ending this story.
I might not have been with it since the beginning - I actually started reading this fic
two or three days ago - but it pulled me immediately in. I can't tell you how often I was crying,
reading of Hiro's nightmares and hallucinations and how badly he just wished to return back
home safely, always having the thought in my mind that Tadashi and the others were thinking he
was dead. Really a brilliant job! :D
I'm somehow glad that I could read it without waiting for the chapters too long, though I am sad that it is already over. I really enjoyed reading it.

So...thank you very much again and I hope you keep coming up with some good stuff! ;D

Vanessa :D

Yay! It's done! AND SO GOOOOOOOD.
*runs around flailing from epicness overload*

Please update soon I need to know what happens in the story I have to know if Hiro will kind of freak out when he sees Tadashi because he might think it is another dream

OMG OMG OMG SOOOO GOOOD HIRO BETTER BE OKAY. And Vince... sigh. So sad it's almost over.