| Reviews for Maya's Desire |
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  Eli chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 I liked it a lot but i feel like you should have maybe made them a bit older just because 14 isn’t really an appropriate time to lose your virginity, especially to a 16 year old, but it was really good. |
| Guest 666 13 chapter 1 . 1/18/2018 I️ liked it but I think they’re too young I️ mean maya is 14 that’s a little ridiculous so next time make them older but other than that this is really good and SUPER hot |
 deadlybelley6369 chapter 1 . 9/9/2017 Delete this pig |
| Purple Amethyst chapter 1 . 12/7/2016 Great story keep it comin |
| Purple Amethyst chapter 1 . 12/7/2016 Great story keep it comin |
| Freddie chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 I really injoyed this so please make more of them |
| Jess chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 I love this story make more joshaya stories |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2016 Make a second chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2016 Nice job |
| guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2016 I'm sorry to be kinda like pointing out mistakes but it wouldn't be blonde eyes it'd be blue eyes. Other than that it was a good story |
| Paul chapter 1 . 2/4/2016 I loved it! |
| Tilley chapter 1 . 1/2/2016 Okay |
| Skiane chapter 1 . 11/25/2015 This is a pretty good fanficiton for your first. I enjoyed reading this many times over and over again. Maybe you could do more one shots for GMW. I love that show and these fan fictions make it even better. I love love loved this story. You are such a great writer. |
| Emily chapter 1 . 11/19/2015 That was hot, but I was totally distracted by the fact Josh was fucking her in his nieces bed and Maya lost her virginity in her best friends bed. Otherwise A |
| hinata chapter 1 . 9/19/2015 Omg so amazing |
