Sweet! Keep writing, please, this is amazing. And I agree with Avengers13 I think Alex should get hurt. Hehe.

Awesome! Need to work on paragraphs, though. Alex needs to get hurt. Please? lol

This is actually really good. Please write more.

Looks alright so far. You seem to have a bit of an issue with paragraphs, though . . .

Where's Emma?

I really like it... I just watched the movie about fifteen minutes ago ... Only one problem... Each time a new character speaks or a new idea starts should be a new paragraph. Sorry... it bugs me... Anyways, you're a great writer otherwise... and please update soooonnn! *favorites story*

This looks good so far. Is Emma going to be in the story too?

Pleeeeease update this! I am a new Earth to Echo fan and would really love to see more EtE fanfiction! I do have a request: Alex whump, please! Maybe a little hurt/comfort with Alex and Turk?
Great story! Keep it up!

I like it, through I have a question, could you add in an oc, if you don't mind?..

Nice! Keep working on it please!