Great story. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next chapter.

Just no. Can't read anymore. Seems Shepherd can do what he wants and nobody else can do anything about it. Technically the story is fine (grammar and spelling) but it's just so unbelievable its impossible to read. It's also not particularly interesting. Thanks for the attempt but I'll pass.

great world building. I hope u come back to it at some point.

Can I ask why is it that everyone seems to think that any future space military would have a navy controlling the ships? And please don’t say because there ships and because it would be already like the navy let me tell you something WRONG! The army and navy controlled planes before the air force was created so why aren’t they still be the only ones controlling planes why did they create the air force well it is the same here a new military branch should be created and it should be nothing like the navy. That would be more realistic then the navy becoming the space navy.

Right so this is a good story in the places that you actually wrote. Apart from the blatant theft from the books not terrible. But it did have huge sections of it taken.

Cordesh is dead. He was a traitor.

Even more taken from the books.

More story taken directly from the books.

Whole sections of this are taken from the books. And you can tell where because the grammar changes sometimes dramatically.

Is there any chance of this story being updated and completed one day? I feel like I've been waiting for ages...

Please replay at: Christianlepsy at hotmail dot com

Good story hope you update

finally finished and I want more lol.. please please continue the story

great story please continue it

Shame this story has been abandoned

This is a great story. It has too many cliches though like all these supposedly dead people suddenly coming back to life or randomly out of nowhere and happen to be the perfect people to help. Basically it's too many coincidences.