Wait, is Haku a “he” or a “she”!?

Definitely enjoying this story, can’t wait to see more.

Fun switcheroo on the Sakura wanting to be hokage thing!

Awesome chapter man keep up the awesome work and keep updating to the very end. This story has potential to be totally awesome,so please update again soon as possible thanks.

Wonderful job

its to wishy washy for my taste ... but good luck in the future

Intéressant.

I like your writing style but you created a major flaw in your own story by telling your reader to disregard the first chapter.

If you don’t like the chapter and it doesn’t fit where you see the story going then delete it or edit it to fit. As far as story events go you are fine but you have major character continuity issues in chapter 3. Even when just comparing it with chapter 2. Especially with the whole Sakura/Naruto thing. She was a very shallow character in her only other appearance and showed 0 interest in Naruto and now she is spearheaded as the love interest. It just feels weird, rushed and very much patched together.

Like I said I enjoy your story. Love to see where it’s going but just wanted to point out something that can be fatal if not watched.

nah it's fine to sexualize naruto especially ninja or anbu even with hi not being 16 yet it's fanfic norm very common lol

so suddenly kurenai is genjutsu goddess when she definitely wasn't verse Itachi but meh

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

Nice i like it

Wowww

Orginality!

Idk about this...Iruka going crazy and attacking a damn undercover Anbu dosen't seem believable to me anyway good luck maybe I'll come back when it's less cringe

Looking forward to Future chapters. Please don't make this a harem