Great job please

WTF did he just torture his own son just to scare him out of being a shinobi?!

Not sure what to think about this. On one hand the story is good but on the other hand the grammar has it's up and down moments where it feels like I'm reading from a professional author to a noob just writing his first fanfiction. So I'll settle with a decent middle ground, I like the story as a whole but hope you improve your Grammer in the future and update the story.

are you an idiot minato us evil in this story he chained up and torturers his own son for the good of the many thats bullshit minutio is the worst vilan in this story and nothing you do or say will change that

That's pretty dark.

different

i see saddening chapter. i think that so far the girls don't really suit him yet so it would have to wait till later for romantic actions to happen but i think a harem would suit him best to help him deal with all the feeling and memories that he would have to resolve plus the literal physical torture he will have gone through

dam you minato

Poor Naruto his life is such suffering in this, I feel there will be no way that the gods or spirits can make it up to him. I mean he just lost a whole chuck of his life-span saving the village, if he keeps going like that he'll only live to the age of 24. I still think that no one else has what it takes to be the hero other than Naruto lol.

I feel bad that Naruto who once had the potential to live to be 150 has an ability that drains that life-force that seems like he won't make it past 50. I know that in the shinobi world many hardly make it to 18, just saying it seems like the ability will kill him before something else, that is if he messes up.

interesting

The idea was good, but then you keep constantly under powering him and then you keep jumping around the plot. Also, I would recommend sticking to either serious or laid back in the story because those two can't mix in this type of story.

just be a little realistic and put yourself in naruto's place ... in cannon he was dumb moron who was manipulated with kindness but in your story he is a dumb moron who is being tortured by his own father yet willing to sacrifice himself for others ... I wonder what kushina would do if she were alive or minato would've sealed her too

sorry but the story idea is good but the plotline is terrible and a bit unrealistic ( only a bit unrealistic because most anime are the same where the hero is always tortured by those who he would end up saving later).

will of the gods indeed ...

Like this chapter, wonder if after it all will Naruto pick one of the many women that lust after him, or will he end up doing many woman and recreating the Uzumaki line.

Still don't like the idea of Naruto blibly listenng to the voice in his head.