Reviews for The Mermaids Tale
LilithTheSwanDemoness chapter 9 . 1/21/2019
I am so glad to hear from you again! I'll excitedly wait for this new story. Pirates, sex and mermaids? Yes please! Welcome back!
soapdiva288208 chapter 9 . 1/20/2019
The bad news wasn't that bad,lol ! Off to read the rewritten version and i am sure it will be amaing :). So glad to hear that things are going so wel in your personal life and you have an adorable puppy !
LilithTheSwanDemoness chapter 8 . 6/12/2017
Will you continue with this story? I read it from the moment you posted it and I really love it. It's just been a long time since you last updated it. I hope you haven't lost your inspiration
OncerCaptainSwan chapter 8 . 6/15/2016
I love your story! Please contiue it!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
I wish you would continue this story. It is amazing.
Lotte-Simba chapter 8 . 11/26/2015
i really really really hope you'll continue this story cant wait to read what will happen next
Lila chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
Oh my gosh. I love and hate you at the same time because you have written some of my absolute favorite stories and don't update. You're killing me. Please update. I'm begging you. Love and kisses
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Seriously its pointless to read your stories
You begin so many, have the people engaged in them and never ever finish anything
Stick to one story and finish it for a change
Melody Lynn Kamiya chapter 8 . 5/30/2015
Good as always my dear! Keep up the good work and screw the stupid people... Hate the fact they run off all the good writers...
Guest chapter 8 . 4/1/2015
Chapter 9 ?! J'ADORE TELLEMENT cette histoire !
butterfly67 chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
Cat, you're awesome! And I will keep reading regardless of where :)
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2015
I would like to second requests for trigger warnings with this fic. This fic is really walking a fine line between dub-con and non-con. It's very important to note these scenes are not an example of healthy romantic/relationship behavior.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2015
While I do not agree with what Critics United is doing, I think the far bigger issue with your fic, and particularly the last two chapters, is what you're writing is rape followed by psychological abuse afterward. You put no warnings at all on this fic that would let anyone know that such abuse would be occurring.
I'm certain you'll tell me that I don't have to read it, and I will not any further. What you're portraying here as "romantic" is sexual assault and psychological manipulation. You are well within your rights to write what you want. I'm not going to stop you, but I would caution that you put a warning on this fic.
princesseslikepirates chapter 8 . 1/31/2015
You tell 'em! "*Does Killy bow* It's been an honor stirring your lady parts" made me laugh! Screw these damn bullies. Who gave them the authority to police the internet? You don't like smut? Then, don't read it!

I feel bad for Emma (even though I'm enjoying the story). Killian is being slightly nicer to her by removing the ropes. He's given her pleasure, but he hasn't bothered to explain to her why it's happening. I did laugh when she thought he was trying kill her though. He could have given her a head's up on what was going to happen.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2015
Well, he sure has a way of tricking her to fulfill his desires, due to her ignorance of the matter...

And his patience and "explanations" lasted until he was satisfied and 5 minutes after... I felt really bad for emma

But the story keeps getting better and better
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