Excelent story

So happy they found their way back together! Hope there's more to their story!

Absolutely Exquisite.

I love it ... Good luck!#

I love this tone and the way it all turned out. I felt like I could see Bella growing and I am so happy that they found each other in the end. Great Job!

And...what happened next? Huh?! Gah, you're killing me!

Great story :)

Great job on this.

Great story :). I particularly thought the writer dealt with Bellas emotions/feelings of leaving Mike really well and even though I probably would have run out the door with Edward - I'm glad she didn't. Really well done and a great tale. Thank you for sharing with us. x

Thanks for entering & good luck!

Loved it, loved the delicacy that shimmered in the images you wrote about.

I love the Bella didn't leave Mike BECAUSE of Edward, but found her own strength to forge out on her own and gained her own personal success. Not only does it show how much she'd grown, but now if she gets together with Edward, it won't be a threat to either of them. Not to mention I think Bella needed this time on her own for her personal growth.

Thank you for sharing your talent. Good luck!

Nan

Perfection I loved it! I'm so glad she finally left mike. That jerk deserved it. And the ending was so good. I loved every second. Thanks for a great fic & good luck.

This was very compelling. And hot.

Wow!
A piece of art.
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