What a heart breaking chapter! I guess you never know what the consequences will be on others when you make a decision based on your own well being. I’m glad you are still at it with this story. I would hope that at some point, Olivia & Kat begin healing, especially since Elliot is back. I guess that would happen in a perfect world. More please?

I just wanted to let you know that this fic is amazing and I would definitely call it my favorite fic. I hope you're able to update soon

AMAZING CHAPTER! :)

So happy for this update. Your story continues to be one of the most interesting stories here on FanFic, especially keeping the story fresh through 66 chapters. It’s not an easy thing for most writers to do. Hopefully Olivia will continue to her recovery, I’d like to see her happy with aelliotmand Kat before this story ends.

Once again, superior chapter. I’m really loving your story of what took place in the fanfic world of Olivia, Elliot & Kat as a result of William Lewis. I wish I had an imagination like yours and could flesh out the characters and their story lines the way you do. Thank you, I can’t wait to see where this goes from here.

Damn Liz! My heart hurts. I almost started crying. Ugh that was so good. I low key hope Olivia heard part of that when Kat and Elliot were talking.

Omg this story is amazing please update soon!

Wow, what an absolutely phenomenal chapter. I had to read it twice it was that good. You are such an amazing writer, able to capture every characters essence perfectly. Thank you for sharing your talent. I can’t wait to see how Olivia, Kat and Elliott deal with the aftermath of the verdict and the difficult path towards healing.

I finally felt like I could breathe at the end of this chapter. Those lyrics were perfect! Almost started crying reading you are my sunshine.

are you going to finish this story ?

Geezes Liz. This whole chapter just ripped my heart out and stopped it into the dirt.

Thanks for this update. The story is so heart wrenching, it makes me want to cry. I still want to read more and more. I hope things go well in your life.

Girl, this is one of the best FF's I've ever read... And I'd love to continue reading it! You're a great writer. Keep up the good work!

Can you tag Elliott in this fic so people won't waste their time reading it. I started reading and realized this is not a Rolivia fic. so I just wasted my time

I’m not sure how long you have been writing this story , but it seems like it’s been a long time. I came across your story quite accidentally and I haven’t been able to put it down. Not only have I been impressed with your writing style but also the fact that you are a young writer as well. I have not read very many fanfics with as much sophistication and character development as this one. I will be sure to continue to read this until you bring it to a close no matter how long it takes. You are young, traveling, getting your education and writing one hell of a story. Great job! Keep up the good work!