Nice job! I tend to find a lot of little jewels of stories have so few reviews...

Excellent job, and I found the way you charaterized Hiccup and Astrid perfect for their circumstances.

this is amazing very good job

Totally agree with you there on the PTSD for Hiccup, I really wish the villagers will make it easier for Hiccup and the Hicstrid you have going on is perfect! I can totally imagine them being like this! Wonderful

Oh damn - that was scary!

You really had me going there! Chilling!

PS: But the name is DRAGO.
Not "Drogo".

I'm surprised at the lack of reviews for this story. It's very well written and I hope to see more.

Can't believe this has gotten so few reviews? It's a really good story thus far, with lots of emotional detail and feels. Very good dialogue and vestment in character interactions and internal challenges.

I'd like to see more, and am interested in what types of external challenges that both Astrid and Hiccup will face and how they'll deal with them together.

My only criticism with this chapter was the lack of description about Astrid sleeping next to Hiccup. It doesn't need to be vulgar or explicit by any means, but here it kinda felt like she just took off his leg, reassured him and wished him good-night, and then left to sleep in the other room or something.

But overall, a very good first few chapters, and a good opening. Hope to see more soon!

Sweet, lovable chapter! Aww! Hiccup and Astrid are so cute together!

sweet and romantic. Nice job