oh, wow! please come back to this!

Ahh, cliffhanger! Anyhow, I hope you're doing well and staying healthy~

Pplease update

This is a masterpice!

Now this ff is getting very interesting

I Kind of feel sorry for Sasuke but on the other Hand he should suffer!

I want shikaTema!

Aww I love Neji and Tenten. They are bonding!

I'm sure you've had a lot of feedback about the sheer quality of your pacing, and the characterisations and the budding relationships and solidarity between everyone in this story. I do think this story is beautiful, romance and friendship wise, and I applaud you for doing such a great job with it. The SasuTenNeji love triangle is progressing quite nicely, and you portray all of these characters with incredible depth and insight. Even though I'm not a SasuTen shipper (NejiTen!) myself, I think they're very human and very raw, so I wouldn't mind seeing those two together.

Part of the reason why I didn't leave a string of reviews from start to finish was because I wanted to see how you explored Tenten's relationship with her father. And, personally, I see domestic abuse - in all its forms - as an extremely debilitating thing that is incredibly traumatising to men, women and children. Being a victim myself, I appreciate that you conveyed Tenten's constant feeling of mortal peril and terror so accurately. It's difficult to hate the abuser, especially when they're a parent, because as Tenten says, he's the only family she has left and there are moments in her past when she remembers the man who loved her and treated her like a daughter and not a dishrag. She's human, and hides her trauma and sorrow behind a mask at school, and doesn't show it unless she's around Neji who no doubt feels similarly to her. Their relationship is so tender, more so than her's and Sasuke's, even though they'd only just met.

Overall, your story is a diamond to behold, from start to finish. Your exploration into Tenten's feelings regarding her family is thoughtful and touching, and it's definitely the thing that stands out to me the most. Thank you.

misspandalily

FUCK THAT SHIT

SASUKE WYD

BAD SASUKE

TENTEN IS NEJI'S

FUCK OFF

What a cliffhanger. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Im do exited for the next chapter! I hope you updated soon

Alright I saw this kiss coming and I'm somewhat guessing that there will be one btw neji and tenten ( I hope ). Honestly I could go either way with NejiTen or SasuTen but if sasuke starts to become a total ass to tenten I go with NejiTen but if visa versa I go with SasuTen if both of them are total asses to her ShikaTen or OccTen is where it's at.
Not telling you wat to do just my thoughts
Pls update soon
SMB Outies ;3

Hiya,

I'm not sure how I feel with the SasuTenNeji love triangle thingamajig, but as long as it ends up with NejiTen, I'm happy...ish. (As in...please make it end in NejiTen. Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease.)

At the end, did she mean she loved him in a brotherly/sisterly way? Cause I'm pretty sure she did...but I'm not entirely sure.

Okay...the section in Sasuke's POV...it's not grammatically correct to change a third person POV into first person in the middle of (or at any time at all,) the story to first person. I think it'd be easly to change that. But...yeah. Just saying.

But...not an entirely original idea, but still pretty interesting, because you've put some twists on the usual stereotypes. Keep going with this - you can definitely get to good places with this fic.

Just finished re-reading this chapter. hope your planning to finish this fic. I really am enjoying it. either way hope things are well