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Ugh, why is there not anymore! Gods sake. It was just getting to the juicy bits.

I love this fic.

I love this story. Jana has a really strong personality that I'm sure will collide with the doctor's. And I tottally against doctorxriver, so update soon!

I hope you update this book it’s great

Really enjoying it so far. It’s well written and interesting. I like how you’re setting up River’s conflict, it’s much more interesting and angsty (in a good way) than the way it’s usually done where River wasn’t originally with the Doctor and everything is fine between her and the OC.

This was good till you changed to first person is there really any need for it? Can you not just pick a person a stay in it? Using multiple resins is just so confusing

just found this story, hope you keep updating! it's really good

LOL! XD Jana probably thinks the Doctor left the planet to get some baby mommas XD I love this book a lot! I hope you plan to continue it!

I love Jana. She's not some perfect, nice person. She's a devoted soldier, she demands respect, and she has standards that she expects people to meet. She can be mean when they're not met and I love it. The Doctor isn't an almighty figure to her. He's just another guy, a comrade at best, and you can see all of this through her actions without a single word of explanation. I can't wait to see more of her sassiness, not to mention more River vs Jana faceoffs. Not that Jana has anything to worry about and I think her self-assurdness will show in their future interactions.

I miss this. It was so good!

this ending was amazing pls update soon with the next chapter

please update this story soon! please!

please update soon?!

please update this story soon