| Reviews for Our Lives Together for better or for worse? |
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  Arra-chan chapter 6 . 12/2/2017 Too chessy but all in all the story is good... Kudos... |
 Mei Yuzu chapter 6 . 12/12/2016 i love it. hope u update soon. i really love it. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/4/2016 Bitin. But good story tho -NMA S. |
| CML chapter 6 . 6/27/2016 ADOREI é mt amor meodeos 33333 |
| Mae chapter 6 . 5/16/2016 Thats great you continue the story after so long, Im glad to know it and love this last chapter :) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/27/2016 UPDATE! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/26/2016 muchas gracias el tiempo valio la pena :D |
| Hawk chapter 5 . 11/2/2015 Plz continue this story... |
| TinyBird1010 chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 Just read the first chapter, the plot sounds good and I like it. I like your comments/ A/N on there (I might use that on my own fics,maybe). Maybe don't do individual points of view. It was a weird and short transition. But besides that, it's going good. Best of luck with your other stories too |
| Lokitic chapter 3 . 4/12/2015 I definitely see room for improvement in this. It's really strange for the story to be in English and then "Ano", "Okaa-San" or "Daijoubu" suddenly buts in. Just.. Pick a language and stick to it? If that makes any sense. xD Okay next point is something that can be fixed pretty easily. For flashbacks most authors would italicize them instead of just saying "FLASHBACK" It makes the fanfiction look more well-written. Oh and the random author's notes in the middle of the story is pretty distracting. "A FEW MINUTES LATER...(lol I always wanted to do that)" It just ruins the mood of the story, and if you do want to do time skips its better you use the line/page breaker ((I really don't know how to describe it, sorry haha.)) Also you need to state the plot more, if a person didn't read the summary they would have next to NO idea why Yuzu and Mei were avoiding each other. And remember, Mei isn't a Tsundere, she is a Kuudere. She rarely shows emotion, just a small reminder. All of that aside though, it's a really nice story. Could be better written but I'm sure that you will become an amazing writer very quickly with practice. ((Whoops I ended up writing a whole essay sorry)) |
| mirkcgu chapter 5 . 4/3/2015 so sweett :)) i love it |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/31/2015 Lovely indeed..very silly and romantic in the end... I wonder who's thrown ball paper to Mei? Harumi might be? Lol...update soon please... XD |
| cassandra.scalella chapter 4 . 3/19/2015 Sadly Mei's chacarter is kuudere type not tsundere.. oh well too bad |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2015 Kinda hilarious Lol! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2015 Moreeeee update please... :-) Anyway, thanks for update... :-) |
