I have read this story before and have been wanting to reread it but could not remember what it was called and I now come across it by poor chance

Wow,,, heck of a world you created. So very complete. Enjoyed every chapter and watching Bella grow. Fantastic story and thank you for sharing your words. Thanks to your Beta for making your words sing. Meg in Texas

Burn baby burn!

to bad you didn't grow up fifty or so years before you met bella edward.

jacob had to knock his girlfriend up before he would believe his own daughter? i would have told him to kiss my ass. what did he do for her when moved to forks other than buy her a beat up old truck from his friend billy. bella still had to get a job to pay for her own gas, she did all the cooking, cleaning up and laundry. did charlie pay her an allowance for all that work? it's not like he still had to pay hundreds of dollars a month in child support. bella even bought her own clothes and personal items. charlie was a shit father, probably a shit husband too.

are all of the tribe a bunch of jack asses? sounds like it. and don't get me started on charlie! instead of asking bella for her side he just dis regards everything she said in favor of billy and jake? what kind of jack ass is he? so much for being a cop and observing all the facts!

was Edwards scent poisoning her? i read a story by Kittyinaz about Bella and Godric and that was the case. even hen Edward wasn't in her room he would leave something with his scent to keep control of her. great story, check it out.

Damn, I'm not even half-way finished yet and I'm already adding it to my favorites. That's how good it is.

Communicating and cooperating with the venom! Brilliant

hhhmmm... Good sense of smell... Vampires suddenly stink... suddenly devours great Quantity of food... I see what you did there! I woder what her coat color will be...

hahahahaha sunshine and no rain. LMFAO. Darling, Florida is basically the tropics, it rains like clockwork here.

so awesome thanks for sharing

Good story

Absolutely loved this story the second time just as much as the first!

I've just started this story and I really liked this first chapter! I can't wait to continue your fanfiction :)