Love it

Bonjour !
J'ai adorée ta fic ! Est ce qu'il y aura une suite ? J'espère que oui

What a great piece. I wish i could have read more one it! Very fee errors. Keep up the great work!

Wow... just wow this so ridiculous rushed and just horrible writing... I got a headache from trying read this

I liked this story a lot. There were some grammatical and spelling errors, however, I encourage you to continue writing. This was so unique. That is rare among fanfictioners, and I would rather read a good story with bad grammar than a bland story with perfect grammar.

Wonderful story. A few errors grammatical and spelling "Aura" should be "Auror" for instance.

A little bit of english error here and there, but the story plot was awesome! Is the story still ongoing? Cause i would love to read more!

This was so good! Love it and the ending just perfect!

WOW! just plain beautiful

Loved it, a little fast paced but still happy ending:D

great story! wish you could expand it a little! thanks for writing it.

i liked the story but it was a Little hard to understand. it was a Little rushed.

Brilliant!

That was awesome, you should make chapter's out of this story. it's got me wondering what will happen if you were to continue with the story.

Okay, you have a good concept of your plot but it needs a rewrite. I'm not suggesting you change it completely, you just need to work on your grammar and give the story a more detailed perspective. Also it's aurors, not auras. You also forget to use periods after a paragraph or sentence several times. Switching the places or the events is confusing due to a lack of dividers to indicate the change.

You are moving the plot so quickly I lost track of what was really happening. Aside from those, it is good but it could get better. I hope I haven't insulted you with this review and I'm sorry if I did but this story had potential to be great with the right details. I just hope this advice benefits you in the long run.