Reviews for The Bra Hanging From The Ceiling Fan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha a nice one shot but it's quick will make an epilogue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny and cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a really cool idea :D but you have quite some typos and tense mistakes in there that make the flow slack a little. But it's still a really cool oneshot and it made me grin a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. that was sweet. but i hope that you could do a lot of editing in this story. i notice that there is a lot of misspellings and grammatical mistakes. |
![]() ![]() hoo la relaciĆ³n amor odio yupi jeje |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do like this story and I hope that you will update it soon. |
![]() ![]() This is indeed a lovely story... (Thumbs up to the story) As Rin wished for a " Next time "...when she would make sure of something ...XD XD XD...I also hope for "next times" for the story... So if U can please continue with it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, this was cute and well written, nice job : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's adorable. God it's been too long since I've last watched Inuyasha. Man I loved that show. Anyways, I won't ramble, this was amazing. Best wishes. Hammer n' Nail |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had fun too with this reading XD, fresh but spicy, a good reading indeed. I hope Rin was prepared somehow for contraception XD Thank you so much. Your imagination and your writing is like a present for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Will this continue or was this a oneshot? Great job if it is ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where do I start: I loved it! The team of Rin and inuyasha against Maru is a great idea. I kinda knew he liked her because kids at that age they pick at each other . Is funny! The story is great and the addition that he loved her was sweet. The ending was great I loved the fact that she wasn't to add his boxers ... Great story! Like always :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adore the love-hate relationship Sess and Rin have in many modern AU fanfics. Do you think you will make a longer story like this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww so sweet! |
![]() ![]() how bout a sesshomaru and rin story called silk panties hangin of the car atenna while driving though the city would that work for an idea? as for this story will there be more it was really good so please write more please! |