You focus so much on people as purely good or evil that it's a tad irritating. There are plenty of gray characters too you know. None of them are as black and white as you're making them out to be.

LOVED it! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how ALL the Jinchuuriki/Jinchuriki and Biju/Bijuu are working together and that you're showing each one's story/progress. :D

Good so far. :D

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Really enjoying this

So happy to see you updae

This is really good.

This was such a delight to read. You write leagues above most fanfiction writers here. I read this fic in one sitting for most of the night, gripped by the scenes you painted.

The story was compelling and gripping. The writing flowed smoothly. Perhaps the only critique I really have are the lack of transitions between scenes (I’m reading on mobile and there seems to be no delineation in between them).

Another thing of note is the sub-plot where Naruto invites the heads of the clans to a meal. It seemed to veer off-course, leaving the reader hanging as to its true purpose. For what reason did Naruto invite the clan heads? Even Kurotsuchi and Roshi? I thought he was going down to business at the end of the meal, asking them for an alliance or even announcing something of import bit no? It was just a meal for seemingly no reason. I get that an alliance should already be in the subtext, but Naruto seemed to just be showboating for the heck of it. If he was just demonstrating his political prowess, then it’s a bit too early for that isn’t it? He’s not in the running for Hokage, at least not any time soon.

I can only hope to one day reach this level of thought put into my stories. I hope you continue writing and even finish this little gem because it would be such a waste otherwise.

Continue and update please soon.

This was a really enjoyable story to read, I'm glad I finally got to it.

So since Itachi and Orochimaru remembers, does that mean Tobi and some of the akatsuki remembers too?!

Just found this fic - and it’s AWESOME! It’s been more than a year since the last update, but I really hope you decide to continue!

Best fiction just perfect

Ah! So good! I could not stop reading! There are a lot of stories where Naruto goes back in time and ends up on his 12 year old body with a change to do it all again, sometimes by himself and sometimes with a few other comrades, but this is the first time it’s been Naruto and the rest of the jinchuuriki. It’s also interesting that a lot of other key players are experiencing memories in the forms of dreams of what has happened in a future that Gaara and Naruto think is lost. Also, having Shikamaru figure out that Naruto is the Yondaime’s son is perfect. Out of all of them, I think Shikamaru would be the first to at least have a suspicion if he’s not the first one to figure it out.

Over all, great story and I know it’s been almost an entire year since you’ve last updated, but I really hope you haven’t given up on this magnificent story. Please update soon.

Update!