this is perfect.

God this was somehow even sadder than the actual book. Couldn't stop crying. Good job

Well shit, that hurt. I'm heart is too overwhelmed by the feels. Your story was the bloody death of me. Haha anyway, love the ship, but I hate that he still died. :(

Damn, damn, damn, it hurts. Loved it though. I think I'll need a Death Cure after The Death Cure.
Many thanks.

I cried and cried whhhhyyyyy page 250 is the death of me

This so sad and good at the sametime. I cried the whole time.

Fuck, this hurt more than it did when it happened for real in TDC fuck I'm crying

how dare you

The book: :'(. No no no no no.
This Fanfiction: ;-; What a sad beautiful tragic love story..

FUCK
FUCK
FUCK
FUUUCCCKKKK
THE FEELS
THIS IS EVEN WORSE THEN HOW IT WAS IN THE BOOK

How could you just.. He really.. Oh god I'm literally crying!

I just made me self sad...oh well

Oh my god. . . .this was so sad. I hated the way Newt dies in The Death Cure and I was so upset. Now you brought a new version of this ending with the love and the sadness like a everlasting romance between them and when Thomas told someone that he loved him the same time he had to say good bye. . . .Its perfect. I love it sooooo much. Your a great writer and never stop writing :)

Well that was frickin' amazing and gut wrenchingly heart breaking all wrapped up into one...well done, terrible situation, but great writing :) love this ship :D x

Its so beautifull...
I go to my bedroom to cry...