Oh please please please update...i really want natza to happen soon but that might kill the flow of the story...sorry for being desperate but overall the story is great...mayb wait for a couple more chapters b4 confessing...within those chapter would be moments where they finalise how strong their feelings are towards each other, until then idk how their going to tell each other...i just hope there wont be too much drama:)

Wow cool story

U see it's stories like yours that make me scream at characters but make me wanna read more... it's how do u do that?

Ackkk! NUMBER ONE:never make erza weak unless she's actually hiding some mega super Saiyan OP God slaying magic
NUMBER TWO:plz make sure she is hiding some sort of awesome power because her weakness is giving me cancer
NUMBER THREE:... * Que Dramatic music*... nice work I couldn't find any spelling mistakes or anything else, I really like this natsu keep it up

You new to update

Your story is quite good and have new things.

I liked it.
Please continue update.

I really love this story.. I am NatZa fan too.. I hope you not abandon the story like the other..

I'm liking the story
your idea is great but I have a few problems
1: Story: please explain why lamia scale is bad because they have absolutely no reason to attack Fairy Tail , unlike Phantom Lord whose job was to capture Lucy. It just feels like a pointless battle I can't get excited for.
2: Pacing: pace your story out better in the jura fight all they was "nasty punches him ,jura threatens natsu, you say they fought for a bit but dont say how ,then just say. Hooray Natsu and Erza won. I dont get it how did they won you didnt even explain erza's fight this chapter could have been spread out into 2 chapters.
3:Details: give more . Details on how the Setting is you never even said where Natsu and Erza found Lyon and jura. Also please describe the sword more all we know it's a sword with a black blade... what kind of sword is It .katana? Broad sword? Short sword? Etc?
Also any other scene u give little details
4:Fluff/more to read: your story needs more meat. And by that I mean more words you can add more dialogue between characters or setting up a situation or more inner monologue in a characters mind. You know more for the reader to enjoy even if it's unneeded as long as it's enjoyable.

Now this isn't a hate comment cuz he hope your story goes far i can great potential for your story you just need to polish around the edges
I hope you take my advice
p.s. I wrote this on my phone so if there's and spelling errors im sorry

Its good

That's totally different with lots of changes but its awesome