Reviews for Children of the Grave
Guest chapter 7 . 4/17/2019
Holy Crap Awesome Beacon acronym!
Gundam Emperor00 chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
I liked this crossover of RWBY. I'd like to see fanfics of the rest of the MCU, to make a chronological line in the Marvel/RWBY Universe.
DocHoliday0316 chapter 15 . 7/18/2016
I just binged this entire fic, and I have to say, I really love it! You've done a great job at combing the two universes as well as adapting certain MCU films. I didn't expect you to adapt parts of Iron Man 3 in the later chapters.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you update soon.
Matt22152 chapter 15 . 3/14/2016
Will Pyrrha and Penny wise up to notice Weiss is still alive?
DaManWOFear chapter 13 . 2/28/2016
Wow, the chase scene was done differently compared to the film. This was well done.
DaManWOFear chapter 12 . 2/26/2016
[SCREECHING NOISES]
DaManWOFear chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
A heartwarming and emotional chapter, and heartbreaking too. It reminds me more on "The Ultimates" storyline where Bucky lived in old age. But Ruby comforting him in his final hours brings an emotional impact.
DaManWOFear chapter 9 . 2/19/2016
This is nice plot progression. In the film, it was Nick Fury as the target; here, it was Ozpin and Ella. Now we're headed to the ambush scene. Heading to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 14 . 2/18/2016
I do like the concept, retelling some MCU stories with RWBY characters. But you've kinda failed in the execution. Ruby and Weiss, for example, are still interesting characters. But they're not even remotely close to being Ruby and Weiss.
DaManWOFear chapter 8 . 2/18/2016
So Ruby is celebrating her birthday at Weiss' place and a nice introduction of Penny. And Jarvis as a butler? I can dig that. And Roman is in this story... as a rival businessman (Roman Hammer? Justin Torchwick?)... that sounds rad. On top the next chapter.
Matt22152 chapter 13 . 2/13/2016
don't you think you made things a little obvious about this Summer Soldier, in any case this story is going to be kicked 'off with a Yang' stupid pun
DaManWOFear chapter 7 . 2/12/2016
So you put the 'Operation Market Garden' part in this story and a nice conversation between Ozpin (Nicholas Ozpin?) and Ruby. It's different from the film. And Blake here is a Wakandan princess? I would love to see her as Black Panther in the near future. Overall, very good.
DaManWOFear chapter 7 . 2/12/2016
So you put the 'Operation Market Garden' part in this story and a nice conversation between Ozpin (Nicholas Ozpin?) and Ruby. It's different from the film. And Blake here is a Wakandan princess? I would love to see her as Black Panther in the near future. Overall, very good.
DaManWOFear chapter 6 . 2/11/2016
This Cinder is more formidable; she can pass up as your story's version of Viper/Madame HYDRA. Really fits the evil Nazi stuff. And Ruby got scared in her first tough fight? Good thing that Yang makes the save. Alright, on to the next chapter.
DaManWOFear chapter 5 . 2/9/2016
So OK, we got a Nazi Cinder empowered with Dust, Ruby beating up Junior and Agent Lie Ren' busy life. Very good chapter...
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