This is an interesting little AU. I very much enjoyed the premise you laid out, and I look forward to reading more of it.

Thanks for writing an Everyone Lives sort of story! :D

Wow, i've wandered so far away from this fandom and only came back because of the Persona5 hype...and I sure am glad that I'm here again :) Now Theo...isn't he McDreamy and McSteamy all rolled into one? I'd definitely be a regular at his cafe should he ever open one. It still bothered me no end that he wasn't a romanceable option in the game. Anyway, back to your story - you're off to a fantastic start. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for 'em :D

Haha, I like what you're doing with the chapter titles.

Theodore's requests!

Off the top of my head...

Iwatodai Film Festival (as this was before the shrine request).
Naganaki Shrine
Gekkoukan High School
Iwatodai Dormitory

I'm loving this fanfic and the characters; there isn't enough fanfics of this couple. I look forward to the next update.

I have a preference for what to call the female main character when I write her. When I write both the female and male characters as twins, I prefer to call her Minako (to compliment Minato) and when it's just her, I call her Hamuko. Though the Japanese fans dubbed her Kotone, I think Hamuko is more popular for the west. But it's up to you. I like this story so far, so keep at it.

I really liked it, I think that you're doing a fine job so far with avoiding the female protagonist's name.
Even using little pet names could help to avoid using one.

Wow! It looks so good but at the shame time it's really short...
That's not fair... I wanted more!
I'm sure it's going to be really cool, that's why I'm already looking forward for the next chapters.

Good luck with your first multi-chapter fanfic!
I'll be waiting for more awesome stuff! :D

Nicely done so far!

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, there aren't enough Theo/FeMC ones around!