I loved the story but dean getting sick is not as good as Sam getting sick

Loved it!

i like the idea and the plot but the chapter and the one before him are way to long,its will be for the best if u divide the first and second chapters to ,more parts

Hot damn that was good

Aw, I really liked this story! I'm currently in bed sick with a trash can nearby, so this was a great read. I could really empathize with the boys. Plus, it was cute to watch Sam suffer, and later Dean. Because I suppose in a sucker for hurt/comfort. Basically, great job.

I liked the idea a lot, I also liked that it was soo long, that is awesome! I hope Dean doesn't get sick... or maybe I hope he does, I don't know, I am a sucker for Hurt and Comfort. If you can take a little constructive criticism, I think you would benefit for reading a little about "Showing and not telling" when you write. You have whole sections that are pure showing and are awesome, but some times you get too much into the telling and it pulls you out from the story a little. Still, nothing harder than showing instead of telling. Anyway, it is really great!

Nicely written. I love caring Dean

Aww, poor Sammy. I feel bad for him - I dealt with a stomach bug like that two years ago, and I wanted to just curl up and die. But at least he had an awesome big brother to take care of him the whole time. And hopefully it was just food poisoning (or not, because I love sick!Dean and caring!Sam too!) because I'm sure Dean would really hate being as vulnerable as Sam was.

Anyway, this was a great story, especially since it's your first on the site! I hope to see more like this in the future. :)

I thoroughly enjoyed. I mean, there is nothing better than a sick Sam and caring Dean. Love how we got a glimpse into Sam's college life and how he felt scared about Dean & John's reactions if he did need them. You did a great job with this. Thanks!

awww, I haven't read a sickfic this good in months! This was awesome, thank you! :)

awwww that was really good